LJIdol 3 Strikes - Week 3 - Morgenmuffel

Mar 06, 2022 02:26

What the - ? Do you have any idea what time it is? Normally you children wouldn't have found me awake so early, but as it happens I woke up from a horrible nightmare about missing breakfast because I was being pestered by annoying children who wanted me to tell them a story, and then I was unable to get back to sleep. Thank goodness that ( Read more... )

curmudgeon, ljidol, fiction

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d0gs March 10 2022, 21:09:19 UTC
I loved this so much. The voice was wonderful and it really made me laugh more than once! :D

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hwango March 11 2022, 16:41:05 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad it made you laugh. = )

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mollywheezy March 11 2022, 21:29:00 UTC
This was great, so much fun! I love your fairy tale style!

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hwango March 12 2022, 09:27:09 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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swirlsofblue March 15 2022, 20:00:56 UTC
This is incredibly fun and humorous, and all the little details are very amusing, love it

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hwango March 16 2022, 02:43:24 UTC
Thanks!, I'm glad you thought it was fun!

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viagra March 16 2022, 18:05:25 UTC
You know, your stories tend to belie something I find interesting - who exactly are all these children that are constantly clamoring for bizarre fairy tales first thing in the morning? You put lots of little details in that really make me think about the world your characters live in and I really enjoy that. Never mind the fact that your sense of humour really tickles me. Won't someone think of the poor Phoenixes that can't rise from their ashes?!

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hwango March 17 2022, 00:09:36 UTC
I think they must be very ghoulish little children, since they keep coming back in spite of how horrifying some of these are. They also seem to travel as a group, since there's always a collection of them no matter what time of day they happen to stop by. They're also very curious children, since they seem to interrupt with questions at least once per story in spite of the fact that they rarely get good answers. Thanks for noticing them!

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md_meezer March 16 2022, 18:07:52 UTC
I always look forward to everything you write and this did not disappoint. Feel sorry that the happy sun thought it was being waved at so shined brighter only to be killed.

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hwango March 17 2022, 00:10:20 UTC
I do feel bad about the sun, but it's probably not the worst thing I've done in one of these.

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