Fic: Breathe In; Breathe Out (NC-17)

[hwexchangemod]

Author: skellywag
Recipient: the community!
Title: "Breathe In; Breathe Out"
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Crossdressing, references to gore
Summary: Holmes enlists Irene Adler's aid to make him a woman in an attempt to solve a case potentially involving Jack the Ripper
Word Count: 5,401
Disclaimer: All characters engaging in sexual activity are well over 16

Comments

[shes_gone]

Holy CRAP, I love this A LOT. Just, the whole first part with Irene was genius - hilarious and hot. You got my heart rate going from the moment Watson entered the room, and he was perfect, pressing his advantage and then wielding his scalpel to save Holmes from the corset! :D :D :D WONDERFUL. And then of course the sex. Holy crap. UNF.

Such sharp, gorgeous writing all the way through. ♥ ♥ ♥. Lovely work!

[skellywag]

Hahaha I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Irene is such a riot to write.

[barush]

Oh, that was hot <33 What an unusual premise, I liked it a lot :) And I'd love to see how it all plays out! It could be pretty awesome if Holmes caught Jack the Ripper :)

[skellywag]

:) If anyone could have caught him, it would have been Holmes for sure. Thank you for reading!

[chibitoaster]

Ooh, this was good! I totally want to see what happens next - at the party, does it work? Is Holmes injured 'cause he can't move around as well in a corset and 30 pounds of clothing? Is Watson there to help him.

You've GOT to continue this story, you know that, right?

Totally hot, and great voices for all of them!!

[skellywag]

I'm so glad you liked the fic! :3 But, tbh, I didn't really think out very much of what would happen after. I wrote this having a very good idea just how far I wanted to take it, because case-fic isn't really my forte. v.v;

[reallycorking]

OOOH this is so great! I LOVE Irene's role in this, and Holmes's inability to cope with the corset, and AHHHH Holmes and Watson dancing together <3 And of COURSE Holmes would discover the perfect lube! XD

This has such a great premise as well as OMG HOT sex. Awesome fic!

[skellywag]

*grin* Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[soliandxpyne]

Loved this. \

From the vivid imagery, to the realism (obv, even with the best of help, Holmes isn't going to be a total babe as a woman, lol), to the characterization (guh, Hotson, hit him with your cane and that wry little look on your face again, please), this was fantastic. And Holmes-invents-lube sex, yessss (while Gladstone continues to sleep in the background...). >:d

Such a great, fun read, thanks so much for sharing this!

[skellywag]

Yeah, RDJ is just a little too masculine to be a dainty, pretty woman lmao! I had a lot of fun writing this fic, and I'm glad you liked it. :3