You really captured them, it felt like it really was Ian that told the story. The first part made me smile because it felt just like a real Lunch Time :D The end was intriguing, please make another part soon!
Also, you made me think of that they had a Dailybooth. THANK YOU! Funny Smosh-picture HEAVEN! :D
Yay :D I tried to make it Ian-y. I want it to be as realistic as possible. And yes, I quite enjoy their dailybooth also :3 I wish they updated more though haha
*does a goofy victory dance* I'm glad you find Ian, Ian-like :D Their dailybooth= amaaaaazing <33 And yes, dramatic music is required for what I have in store for them! >:D
I almost missed this before going to bed!! Blasphemy! lol
I'm in love with your banter!! It sounds so much like Ian and Anthony...and this is a great start to a fic (slow but I can tell it's going to pick up REAL soon). [= I'm so excited for the next part.
:) I'm glad you caught it before sleep claimed you :P I have the next part done... but I'm still reading it over and over like a crazy person, trying to perfect it! Haha <3
WWWHIIIIIIIIOMG ahem, sorry 'bout that X)I just got done reading your other story, and now I'm excited there's more :D Can I just say that I totally dig your writing style? You totally captured Ian spot on, as everyone else has pointed out, and the first part could seriously be a real Lw/S! lengthy wiener sucking, aaaaahahaha XD I like that you are not throwing any romance/chrushes into this first chapter, it makes it a great introduction and build-up to the rest of the story. Professionally done! ;D I'm definitely gonna be stalking this story, so be prepared ;) You're seriously good, I'll look forward to more! :D
You make my life with your extra-super-awesome comments of utter hyperness <333 All I can say is thank you thank you thank you thank you, second part will be up soon. Prepare yourself though, because its a little slow :P As for where I learned to write, I suppose I can thank the multitude of bitchy english teachers I have received xD
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You really captured them, it felt like it really was Ian that told the story. The first part made me smile because it felt just like a real Lunch Time :D The end was intriguing, please make another part soon!
Also, you made me think of that they had a Dailybooth. THANK YOU! Funny Smosh-picture HEAVEN! :D
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I'm glad you liked it :D
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Wonder what will happen next? *dun dun dun dun*!!
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Their dailybooth= amaaaaazing <33
And yes, dramatic music is required for what I have in store for them! >:D
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I'm in love with your banter!! It sounds so much like Ian and Anthony...and this is a great start to a fic (slow but I can tell it's going to pick up REAL soon). [= I'm so excited for the next part.
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I have the next part done... but I'm still reading it over and over like a crazy person, trying to perfect it! Haha <3
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Can I just say that I totally dig your writing style? You totally captured Ian spot on, as everyone else has pointed out, and the first part could seriously be a real Lw/S! lengthy wiener sucking, aaaaahahaha XD
I like that you are not throwing any romance/chrushes into this first chapter, it makes it a great introduction and build-up to the rest of the story. Professionally done! ;D I'm definitely gonna be stalking this story, so be prepared ;) You're seriously good, I'll look forward to more! :D
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All I can say is thank you thank you thank you thank you, second part will be up soon. Prepare yourself though, because its a little slow :P
As for where I learned to write, I suppose I can thank the multitude of bitchy english teachers I have received xD
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