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hvnlyumbrlla

Nothing Could Stop it (Chapter 7.5)

Dec 18, 2011 23:31

Title: Nothing Could Stop it (Chapter 7.5)
Pairings: Ian/ Anthony
Rating/Warnings: This is most definitely NC-17. Gay sex. Penises entering anuses. If you don't like that, please do not continue reading.
Summary: A night devoted to expressing and discovering their new-found feelings.
Author's Notes: Most of you probably don't even remember the story ( Read more... )

nc-17, smut, smosh, fanfiction, slash

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hvnlyumbrlla December 19 2011, 21:22:37 UTC

Was it okay? Thank you very much! It was difficult to finish, I'm not very good at writing smut >.<
Possiblyyy? I might...still maybe do an alternate ending...maybe. :P I'm dragging this story out far too much xD

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hvnlyumbrlla December 19 2011, 21:23:46 UTC

Ooops :P Sorry if it kept you up! xD

Naughty Ianthony dreams are always a jolly good show ;P

I'm happy you liked it, like really. I feel like it was terrible xD

who ever uses this? vespiquen8 December 19 2011, 23:15:32 UTC

I really loved it! :D One of my favorite chapters in this story but I still like all of them. :) Even though I was too lazy to ever comment on any of them. :p

Re: who ever uses this? ilovecheesebeca December 19 2011, 23:19:09 UTC

omg, how did it post?? LOL ill delete the other one.

Re: who ever uses this? hvnlyumbrlla December 20 2011, 23:04:58 UTC

Haha ohhhh silly lj and your issues ;P

Thank you! I'm glad you liked this and the rest of the story :D Thanks for reading them <3

name_undecided December 19 2011, 23:38:10 UTC

...this is your first?!
Because it was uhMAYziiing!!! (that's an enhanced version of 'amazing')
I feel like a sick pervert. I was smiling and practically hyperventilating the whole time!

hvnlyumbrlla December 20 2011, 23:07:03 UTC

This IS my first :P
YAY! I'm so glad! Thank you for the wonderful compliment! MOAR EXCLAMATIONS!
Us sick perverts have to stick together ;)

michaelangelo24 December 20 2011, 01:27:45 UTC

Holy snuffaluffagus! That was so damn sexy! My legs hurt from having to cross them the whole time. xP

Anyway, I realize how hard something like that is to write, but it turned about amazing. :D

hvnlyumbrlla December 20 2011, 23:08:38 UTC

Haha! That's a good compliment ;D

Glad you liked it. It WAS hard, oh my god. But I think it was mostly because I had to get over my prudeiness :P Although I think I'll stick mostly to fluff!

Still, thank you so much :)

michaelangelo24 December 20 2011, 23:27:10 UTC

Lol, soon you'll be a sick minded pervert like me. xD

I can totally recognize similar moments from my own first attempt at smut in your writing. I guess they're universal.

hvnlyumbrlla December 21 2011, 03:28:43 UTC

Already happening!

Like similarities in a story you've posted? D: sometimes I accidentally do that, steal ideas and write them down without me realizing that I've read them somewhere before. Grr.

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