Comments | hvnlyumbrlla: Nothing Could Stop it (Chapter 2)

hvnlyumbrlla

Nothing Could Stop it (Chapter 2)

Aug 29, 2011 21:58

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smosh, pg-13

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smoshyluver August 30 2011, 02:23:28 UTC

GAH! Cliff hanger!! When will the next chapter come out? :D I can't wait!!

hvnlyumbrlla August 30 2011, 16:38:36 UTC

Hehe soon, I hope :)

smoshslashbabe August 30 2011, 02:27:37 UTC

I really liked it(: hurry with the next part!! Hhaha good job

hvnlyumbrlla August 30 2011, 16:39:04 UTC

Thank you, glad its enjoyable and not EXTREMELY boring :P

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hvnlyumbrlla August 30 2011, 16:40:05 UTC

:O its good enough so you want to read it multiple times?!? *bounces up and down crazily*
I'm glad you enjoyed it ;P

orangefriday August 30 2011, 02:55:36 UTC

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
I'm sorry, that was my first reaction to the whole ending and I thought that you should know.

Oh boy, I saw that coming and I was hoping to GOD it would be true. :)

Again, I must commend you on your characterization and I can see the boys doing exactly this. Can't wait for the next one!!

hvnlyumbrlla August 30 2011, 16:41:21 UTC

Dang, I was wondering the whole kissing thing was predictable/ cliche... hehe
Next one soon I hope!

purpleswag1 August 30 2011, 02:58:32 UTC

oh mi god..... THIS IS AWESOME! cant wait for the next part!

hvnlyumbrlla August 30 2011, 16:41:47 UTC

thankers you! :D <3