Fic - Violated (Chapter 12)

[huskyfriends]

Title: Violated
Author: Carole B.
Series: Torchwood
Characters: Gwen Cooper, Ianto Jones, Jack Harkness, PC Andy Davidson, Owen Harper
Pairings: Ianto/Jack, Owenp/Other
Gen/Het/Slash: Het, Slash
Warnings: Torture, Forced Sex, Violence, Language
Rating: R/NC-17 for the Prologue
Crossover: None
Word Count: 15,600
Beta: Time Hound
Summary: A serial

Comments

a little quibble to fix

[veritas6_5]

Third paragraph from the end of this chapter

"He barely forgot to breathe throughout that time. "

either "He forgot to breathe..." or "He barely remembered to breathe . . ."

Otherwise, quite wonderful, and a fabulous graphic!

Re: a little quibble to fix

[huskyfriends]

Thank you. There's always something that gets overlooked.

Glad you liked it.

[iolo1234]

Great story kept me reading all the way through to the end and an interesting idea.

[huskyfriends]

Thank you so much. It was fermenting in my mind for a bit, and I took this Big Bang to finally flesh it out. Glad you liked it.

[fide_et_spe]

Poor Andy! Interesting story there, I think you could have an epilogue as I really thought there must be another chapter.

I didn't read the prologue, I'm easily squicked, so I appreciated the warning.

[huskyfriends]

http://huskyfriends.livejournal.com/105486.html
Apparently I forgot linking one in the formatting.

I'm glad it was useful. I was trying to make it noticeable without telling too much.

Thank you.

[jsks]

haunting and frightening.

[huskyfriends]

Thank you.