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Challenge #8 (February) - Ice/Part 2

Feb 24, 2010 00:11

Title:Ice
Author: celadon_55
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Gen
Characters: Don, Coop
Challenge: Numb3r 8 (February)
Disclaimer: (own nothing, not being paid)
Spoilers: None
Warnings: (none, unless you have fear of cold)
Word count: 2408

A/N: Well, hm. This was supposed to be the last part, but it got so long that now there is a Part 3 ending tag as well. ( Read more... )

genre:whump without plot, fanfiction:monthly prompt, genre:gen, rating:pg-13, character:billy, fanfiction, author:celadon_55

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celadon_55 February 24 2010, 17:46:29 UTC

:) Poor guy. So out of it. I'm glad you enjoyed Don's suffering. Hm. That really is the kind of thing you can only say among friends, isn't it?

leoraine February 24 2010, 08:29:51 UTC

Yay, loved this chapter. All the motion and being unable to see, I think anyone would be sick after that, lol. You're great with the description of scenes, feelings, so I can imagine pretty well the setting. Can't wait for the final chapter, thanks.
Btw, who is Lillian Gish?

celadon_55 February 24 2010, 17:48:02 UTC

I'm glad it didn't let you down. Sadly, I don't think Don enjoyed it much, though. Ah, Lillian, the first First Lady of film. I THINK that becomes clearer in the last bit, but if not, I'll explain better then.

aleo_70 February 24 2010, 09:04:38 UTC

Excellent description. I was freezing after the first few paragraphs.

And you took his clothes off as well! What's going on around here? *re-reads happily*

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aleo_70 February 24 2010, 09:39:56 UTC

Totally unrepentant!

celadon_55 February 24 2010, 17:51:04 UTC

Totally sensible!

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wraithness February 24 2010, 14:01:15 UTC

*delurks*

Just wanted to tell you that I'm loving this a LOT.
and I kind of feel proud for knowing who Lillian Gish is. Had to watch some of her movies for one of my film classes. Don and his old movies. ♥
This fic: way to my heart. Thanks! :)
I can't wait for the last part.

celadon_55 February 24 2010, 17:52:36 UTC

Aw! So glad you're enjoying it! And I'm so happy and impressed that you know Miss Gish! She's a big favorite of mine! I thought Don might like her too!

valeriev84 February 24 2010, 18:56:14 UTC

Fantastic! Poor Donny, all of that happening to him just because he was helping someone who's already convicted to death row. I love the way his thoughts jerk and flow and then jump.

And poor Coop, being unable to really do much to help but desperately wanting to do so.

Can't wait for the next part.