Comments | hurt_don: Challenge #1 (July)

celadon_55 in hurt_don

Challenge #1 (July) - Carousel, Part Six

Jan 18, 2010 21:52

Well, glory halleluiah. I mean, the FIRST challenge? I think about two more parts will put this to bed.

Title: Carousel Author: celadon_55
Genre: Gen
Characters: Don (surprise!), Nikki, David, Colby - it's a WIP, so who knows who else might show up?
Rating: PG 13+ Warning: violence
Spoilers: Um...Season 5?
Summary: written for Clue Challenge #1, ( Read more... )

genre:gen, rating:pg-13, genre:whump without plot, fanfiction:monthly prompt, character:nikki, character:team s5-, fanfiction, author:celadon_55

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celadon_55 January 19 2010, 03:21:13 UTC

Hey - it was written for you - needs sincere and thorough whump! Sorry about the delay, but I REALLY think the worst is over now. This part is a little longer to make up for it.

PS You read fast!

aleo_70 January 20 2010, 07:23:36 UTC

Funhouse?

This is definitely fun! Donny at gunpoint is always great and a rifle is something different.

Really liking the way you write Nikki as well.

As to the guns, lucky that Nikki's stolen one works. I wonder if the gunman's has become a touch too waterlogged hence his lack of return fire...

Guess I'll have to read on next time.

celadon_55 January 22 2010, 23:42:11 UTC

Yeah - the Donnie at gunpoint thing wasn't actually supposed to happen, but those bad guys don't always behave. Glad you're enjoying. No more long breaks. Probably.

valeriev84 February 8 2010, 22:49:29 UTC

Oh, this was awesome! Poor, poor Donny, you're just not cutting him a break, are you? Still love Nikki's pov.

Can't wait to see what's next!

celadon_55 February 9 2010, 03:05:44 UTC

LOL. It's coming. Yizkor convinced me that I still can finish something!!!

So, did you have any special requests for your birthday piece, or should I just go with what I have in mind?

valeriev84 February 9 2010, 19:02:00 UTC

Surprise me!