Super Heroes Make Great Con Artists .... Part II

Jan 20, 2016 21:03

Title: Super Heroes Make Great Con Artists
Author: hurinhouse
Fandom: White Collar
Rating: PG
Characters: Neal, Peter, Elizabeth, Mozzie
Summary: Peter, Elizabeth and Mozzie tackle an adventure to help an adorably helpless Neal
Disclaimer: Entirely fiction
Word Count: 15k+

Notes: This is super late for sherylyn's fandom stocking. She ( Read more... )

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doctor_fangeek January 21 2016, 05:41:09 UTC
I happened to see this tonight, and once I started reading, I couldn't stop. I laughed. I cried. I love the way you balance Neal still being, in part, his old self while also being a child. And the calls from his school were so much fun (I especially liked him taking over the art class). Great story! Thanks for sharing.

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hurinhouse January 21 2016, 12:05:57 UTC
thank you - laughed and cried is a fantastic complement! thanks so much for commenting!

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sherylyn January 21 2016, 07:44:58 UTC
This is absolutely **priceless**!!!! THANK YOU x infinity for this, truly. I couldn't have asked for anything "better" in any way!!! I love Neal still being so *him*, even while he's also adorably four (he even won over Alan!! Hee!!). Priceless. Completely and perfectly. So many emotions, all demonstrated so delightfully and wonderfully. **happy, happy sigh**

**GLOMPS YOU** all over again!!!

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hurinhouse January 21 2016, 12:07:25 UTC
yay! I'm so glad you like it. I've never even considered writing deaged anyone before but when I saw it for neal on your list for your stocking I tried it and was strangely inspired. I'm so glad it hit the right buttons!

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hurinhouse January 21 2016, 12:12:03 UTC
and.... I hope you don't mind but I just had to go back and add one last line that I'd forgotten. at the very end.

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sherylyn January 21 2016, 19:25:35 UTC
Awwwww!! I love that line!! Of course I don't mind! That's just a perfect ending line!!!

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sapphire2309 January 21 2016, 10:19:00 UTC
This is ridiculously adorable. Neal is such a perfect combination of himself and a four year old. Neal's go bag - OH, BABY, NO, COME HERE, LET ME HUG YOU. And the phone calls got to the point where I just had to hear the name Cecily Hahn to start laughing out loud.

Love it to bits!!!

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hurinhouse January 21 2016, 12:08:20 UTC
yes neal needs many hugs doesn't he? love him. cecily hahn was definitely patient.

thank you!

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pipilj January 21 2016, 11:21:18 UTC
Aww lovely story, Thanks for sharing.

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hurinhouse January 21 2016, 12:08:39 UTC
thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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leesa_perrie January 21 2016, 15:31:31 UTC
This is wonderful! Humour, angst, h/c and adorableness all rolled into one fantastic fic! Excellent! :D

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hurinhouse January 22 2016, 02:45:53 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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