All Night

[hunters_retreat]

Title: All Night
Timestamp for: A Vision of Black Steel
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: NC-17
Summary:  He didn’t get to treat his bondmate as well as he’d like so he was eager to do this right and not rush it.
Author's Note: A timestamp for A Vision of Black Steel.  This won't make any sense without reading that first.  I wanted a chance to see what

Comments

[ellyk29]

Enjoy this verse so much... thanks for the update!!

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you! These boys are a lot of fun and I'm glad I got to go back and visit them :P Glad you enjoyed it!

[jackien1968]

I love this story, these characters, this world. I don't know if I've commented on the main story, if not I apologize.

The eeriness of that world came through here with only a few small references. It's somewhat reminiscent of The Book of Eli, but is very much its own thing.

I've always been fascinated by characters and people who have both a disability and a special gift, who are "differently abled" in a literal sense rather than as an overly pc euphemism. (My late brother would have fallen off his wheelchair laughing at me if I had ever tried to call him "differently abled.")

This story has a richness of detail, while holding back enough detail to give a feeling of depth.

One small note: the weather phenomenon is spelled lightning whereas lightening is the process of becoming or making lighter. Doesn't detract from the excellent flow of the narrative, though.

Best regards,
Jackie

[hunters_retreat]

LOL! Every time I spell it I forgot which is which... I blame my accent because when I say it there is definitely an extra syllable in there :P

Thank you so much for the comments. When I saw the art for this I immediately knew what I was going to do with Dean. There are so many stories where the loss of sight means some sort of psychic visions but I couldn't see Dean sitting still and becoming some sort of oracle. Instead, he used his gifts in a way no one expected him too. I liked playing with that idea and running with it to see where it would lead :P I couldn't see Dean as anything less than a hunter though, disability or not so this was how it came about :P

The Book of Eli was creepy and awesome and thank you for the comparison. I love a good post-apocalyptic story and getting a chance to bend the world is always fun :P

[jespretender]

This is an amazing story, absolutely love it.

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[meesasometimes]

I read it on it's own without any knowledge of the story...don't worry, it's a perfectly lovely piece of quiet porn with hair washing to stroke my kink :P

[hunters_retreat]

ROFLMAO! I didn't think of it like that... but it is quiet porn with hair washing :P So glad you liked it!!

[ferrous_wheeler]

Love this bit of a quiet moment for Sam and Dean. Thank-You!

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you so much! Once I finished the original story I knew I'd want to come back a few times and see how the rest of the world worked. So glad you came along for the ride with me :P