The Fallen (Part Seven)

Aug 07, 2011 15:00

The field was already slick when they got there, blood and gore painting the path as they made their way to the village they’d hoped to protect.  He’d seen it before but in the seven years their team had been hunting the horde it never got better.  The moment was made even more real somehow when Petri stopped to empty his stomach of its contents in ( Read more... )

story: the fallen, challenge: big bang, genre: slash, fic: original

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angeblond August 9 2011, 22:57:37 UTC
Shame, guilt and dishonor would break them if Dalen had been selfish enough to cross before their time.

I liked the the little girl had grown with Coltran as a brother too.

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hunters_retreat August 9 2011, 23:23:47 UTC
It would have. But it felt like they had come full circle a bit there for me, how Dalen would have stayed in the beginning but Coltran pushed him though, only to have Dalen be the strong one now :P Glad you enjoyed it! And yes, I adore his little sister. She's very much like Dalen.

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