Comments | hunters_retreat: Doing It Right

hunters_retreat

Doing It Right

Feb 20, 2011 22:27

challenge: bingo, verse: charming, genre: slash, fanfic: leverage, *fanfic: supernatural

Comments 16

magnolas February 21 2011, 11:31:07 UTC

I love this verse!

Now that that's out of the way. . . It was awesome to see some insight into how it all started.

Great job :D

hunters_retreat February 22 2011, 02:16:47 UTC

Thank you so much! I've wanted to bring in how Sam and Dean's relationship became so convoluted and work it out for them, but it took a little while to get there :P

Now... we can get back to some PWP!!!

magnolas February 22 2011, 11:31:06 UTC

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! **giggle**

smidgeson February 21 2011, 20:10:20 UTC

Excellent.

What more is there to say?

hunters_retreat February 22 2011, 02:17:19 UTC

*hugs* Thank you! This is definitely one of my favorite stories to come back and visit! Glad you liked it!

phillydogg February 23 2011, 05:46:24 UTC

Absolute perfection! I really loved this!

Everything that happened after Dean admitted asking Elliot to leave was pure gold. I'm glad to see them moving past some of this stuff, even though I love me some angsty/guilty/self-hating Dean.

Great job!

hunters_retreat February 23 2011, 06:23:12 UTC

I figure we'll still Dean's self-hate rear it's head a time or two. He's making some headway but he's got a long way to go before it's completely gone I think. A lifetime of self-recrimination is going to take more than this realization to overcome. Thankfully, he has Sam and Eliot to help him along the way!

alldunn February 24 2011, 03:32:43 UTC

Yay! I like the new take on the next morning. Not as abrupt a withdrawl with a taste of Dean still wanting to continue. Though I gotta wonder, what does this mean for the dynamic between the two now that Dean's head is in a different place. Will he still be as submissive? Here I go, makng it all complicated. I'll just stop thinking and go wait for the next porny installment.

hunters_retreat February 24 2011, 08:07:17 UTC

*hugs* Yeah, the next morning works a lot better from your last view of it! Though no need to worry ... there is more than one reason Dean is the submissive and they aren't all unhealthy reasons :P

We will still get to see Dom!Sam in there... but maybe a little more fun Sam/Dean/Eliot instead of just the Dom/Sub stuff. When the series began it was a lot of rough, loose sex with Dean and Eliot. I like the idea of adding some of that back in for all to see :P

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hunters_retreat February 26 2011, 22:41:50 UTC

Thank you so much! I felt it was about time for Sam and Dean to tackle that bit of past between them :P Glad you enjoyed it!