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hunters_retreat

Safe

Jan 31, 2011 21:41

He felt guilty as soon as he thought it so he took a deep breath, trying to focus on there here and now instead. The place was a bit run down, but still in good shape. The only concession to moving in was that they’d painted their bedrooms before moving in. They still needed to do the rest of the place, and their boxes were all resting in the ( Read more... )

challenge: bingo, genre: slash, verse: story's end, *fanfic: supernatural, au

Comments 18

katsheswims February 1 2011, 12:37:48 UTC

So cute!! And the first hints of something more in their relationship I think.

hunters_retreat February 1 2011, 12:41:24 UTC

Thank you! And yes!! Glad you saw it too! I've always wanted this revelation to be so gradual for them, the redefining of their relationship just continuing on until its just a part of them :P Glad you liked it!

slvrbld747 February 1 2011, 18:01:34 UTC

This is really nice. I love how smoothly, how easily the two of them are slotting into life without John despite the grief, and the guilt. Lovely. -SB

hunters_retreat February 1 2011, 21:24:31 UTC

Thank you! Its interesting to play it as they get further away from the event. At first it was all over grief and just trying to get through every day, but they're past that now and Sam especially wants to know whats going to happen next, where his future lies. Glad you enjoyed this!

Safe mdlaw February 2 2011, 01:03:31 UTC

Best big brother ever. m :)

Re: Safe hunters_retreat February 2 2011, 06:02:00 UTC

I have to agree :P Glad you liked it!

ilovedoyle February 6 2011, 11:14:52 UTC

Read all of this series so far this morning, and I its just the sweetest thing!

I LOVE it and I can't wait for the next part; and hopefully eventually slashy goodness! :-D

hunters_retreat February 7 2011, 07:37:00 UTC

I guarantee eventually slashiness... but how long that will take??? Well... know remember how long it took to get even a kiss out of them in Clock Verse??? Tee hee hee ... these boys might make me work even harder for it... or maybe not. You never know without John there to back Dean off and help Sam remember he wanted to leave :P

ilovedoyle February 7 2011, 20:11:05 UTC

Dude!
Let the slashy goodness be the good thing that comes outta John's death...please?!
*puppy dog eyes* (although mine are no as good as Jared's!)

hunters_retreat February 8 2011, 03:59:22 UTC

LOL! No worries! It's really just a matter of when... not if :P And your puppy dog eyes work just fine :P

alldunn February 9 2011, 02:15:50 UTC

I always foeget about this verse, until you update it. It's taken some time, but it's starting to stand out destinct in my mind separate from Clock Verse. Can't wait to see them settle into this new life.

hunters_retreat February 9 2011, 11:42:02 UTC

LOL! It's the little forgotten verse that could!

When I first started writing it and Clock there were a lot of similarities and that's honestly why I stopped updating this one. I couldn't get a sense of where it was going on its own. Once I got that in my head, then I started it up again. It took a while, but it's definitely found its place now without feeling like a Clock remake to me now :P

Glad you liked this update!