A Vision of Black Steel (Part Three)

[hunters_retreat]

It took four days to get to the Keep and then they were taken to their quarters there, Sam taken with Dean when both Bobby and Dean claimed he couldn’t be separated from them. It was juvenile and pointless but that was the will of the Council, to be left waiting in their rooms like bad children as the elders discussed what to do with them.

It was

Comments

[jennytork]

This was one of the best stories I've read in this fandom!

The lovemaking was so easily defined I could skim over it (which is my preference) and was only a small part of the bigger story (Which is also something I enjoy).

The world you built is beautifully written. I had to look out my window twice to remind myself that the sky is BLUE, not twisting black!

(((((((HUGS)))) Well done!

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you! The art made it so easy to envision a twisted world. I was really lucky to have such an amazing artist to work with! I'm so glad you liked it!

[deannawesson]

I have to say, I agree that this needs to be a verse because I want to read more!!! Really great job on the writing and beautiful art. :)

[hunters_retreat]

LOL! I wouldn't say I won't revisit this in the future (because I love to revisit my stories) but we'll have to see what the muse has in store for me! I'm really glad you enjoyed this!

[vambrace]

Wow! Great job!!

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you!

[ellyk29]

Oustanding! This was one of the best fic's I've read in a very long time. Enjoyed every word.

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you so much! It was an easy write with that art work to look at when I needed inspiration :P So glad you liked it!

[alocine_89]

awesome :D

Well done hun, you took a really difficult idea and totally made it work :D

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you hon! Glad you liked it! I wasn't sure how it would work, but I think it worked out good :P *hugs* glad you liked it!