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aidanirl November 8 2009, 09:45:28 UTC
OMG!
thats it!
OMG!
SO short?!?!?
OMG!
is there gonna be a sequel?!?!?
!!!OMG!!!

*exitment overload*

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hunters_retreat November 9 2009, 00:10:49 UTC
ROFL! As soon as I started writing this one, I had the idea that it would be fun to be a series of stories, sort of like Indiana Jones. Now that it's done... I would love to see where they go from here... but we'll see how long it takes to get to it. Next time I think i'll actually finish it before I start posting it :P

Glad you enjoyed the series hon! And I have a lot of faith that i'll be back to this series eventually... :p

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alldunn November 8 2009, 16:31:14 UTC
Congratulations on finishing!

Still having thoughts on turning this into a serial? Cause I'm curious to know what's going on in the caves. Love the obvious research you put into the story. I knew about the heart against the feather thing, but not the alligator guy beneath.

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hunters_retreat November 9 2009, 00:12:33 UTC
ROFL! Thank you! And you know me... I can't stop turning everything I write in a series... so this will probably come back up to play (after Nano and updating a lot of other stories first :P)

I love Ammut :P For some reason, the idea of the unworthy heart being eaten just tickles me... and it seemed to fit with this story. Glad you liked it!

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song_to_me November 8 2009, 17:00:35 UTC
Love, love, love this story! Great ending, I'm so glad that Jensen came back to Jared and they'll be adventuring together! Thanks so much for finishing this story, it's fantastic!

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hunters_retreat November 9 2009, 00:13:04 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it!

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mangacat201 November 8 2009, 19:59:39 UTC
eMHOOOOOOOOOOOOWHHA... I love the end!! It's great, really great, so Jared is a hunter now, eh?? YAY that's soooo great, and he's got Jensen as well, again, I LOVE THE END!!
Cat

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hunters_retreat November 9 2009, 00:15:08 UTC
Thank you! Glad you stuck around all this time to see how it ended! All your comments really helped keep me motivated to finish this one up! So thank you and i'm soooo glad you liked it :P After almost a year of writing this I was afraid it might disappoint :P

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mangacat201 November 9 2009, 06:25:52 UTC
Well, I know all about years worth of writing so of course that won't deterr me. And you made a lot of progress the last few weeks, so it wasn't that bad. I like the whole story, it was so much fun. Of to new adventures then!
Cat

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miko_jasmine November 8 2009, 21:46:40 UTC
awesome ending! ...but it was a bit short, wasn't it? love this story! sequel in the works perhaps? *hugs*

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hunters_retreat November 9 2009, 00:16:17 UTC
LOL! Yes, it was a short ending, but you know what they say... every story's ending is just another story beginning :P I'm not done with Jensen and Jared just yet :P It might take a while to get the next story together... but they'll be back for more!

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