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Winchester Blood

May 30, 2009 16:53

Winchester Blood

1. Dean

Blood dripped over his fingertips and there was nothing more he wanted than to follow it further, to cut, rip, tear, and dance in her fucking blood. Nothing was more tempting just then, but when he looked up it was Sam fucking holding her for him so he could kill her with the knife she’d left them. Sam’s eyes, wide and ( Read more... )

challenge: spn_teamfic, genre: slash, *fanfic: supernatural, challenge: misc.

Comments 16

neros_violin June 1 2009, 19:18:57 UTC

Intense and absolutely gorgeous. I don't usually "love" drabbles (I'm a sucker for the emotional impact of long fics), but there was so much going on in these short pieces, I LOVE THEM.

hunters_retreat June 2 2009, 06:55:17 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I'm not normally a short fic person but I love the challenge of drabbles, of getting it down to just 100 words, so I figured maybe if I just made a bunch of drabbles that connected as a larger story I would feel like I completed more :P

aylarouge July 3 2009, 05:49:52 UTC

holy crap! Oh wow, it was short but so powerful. *loved*

hunters_retreat July 3 2009, 06:39:33 UTC

Thank you! I find it challenging to write short stories like this so it was a great challenge. Rules for this challenge said it had to be at least 500 wrods though so 5 drabbles it was :P Very fun to write it up in this way though. Glad you liked it!

shudders fireffly March 31 2010, 06:18:46 UTC

damn your stories reach right into that place within us all we tend not to acknowledge, never mind look at. This is a whole new level of heat

Re: shudders hunters_retreat March 31 2010, 06:24:06 UTC

Thank you so much! I don't do a lot of drabbles, but I got it stuck in my head that 5 drabbles would be a fun way to tell a story :P A lot harder than I thought it would be, but it was a fun challenge for myself. I'm so glad you liked the story!

Re: shudders fireffly March 31 2010, 06:43:31 UTC

Um..i'm still really new to all this. What's a drabble? lol

Re: shudders hunters_retreat March 31 2010, 06:55:50 UTC

Some people call a drabble anything small, but the technical definition is a story that is exactly 100 words. :P

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magnifica7 September 6 2011, 16:31:16 UTC

Reads like a powerful myth or legend. And that's what they will be, the Winchester brothers. :)

hunters_retreat September 7 2011, 04:03:06 UTC

Thank you so much hon! glad you enjoyed it!

tricksterfae March 9 2013, 20:16:34 UTC

YES! This is spectacularly awesome. The first three like seriously so canon it hurts. Sorry for leaving comments all over yer page suddenly. Been lurking here awhile :p

hunters_retreat March 9 2013, 20:27:45 UTC

ROFL! Comment away :P It gives me a chance to remember what I wrote and I love hearing people's opinions about things :P Besides, comments inspire me to write more :P

tricksterfae March 9 2013, 21:13:51 UTC

Comment away
:D

"...Sam seemed to be drawn to the light in a way that Dean felt echoed within him."

Anyone who can write spn fic and make me look at a canon scene and think yes that exactly why had I never made that connection?! Is someone I want to inspire to write more. Especially when you can do that AND write brain meltingly hot sex scenes, sometimes in only one sentence :side eyes vision of black steel:

Just finished The Face today btw. I just want hug you because I resisted it because I thought it was a silly concept but I was wrong and you are brilliant and I am so excited for more. I will save comments for over there when I get a chance.

hunters_retreat March 10 2013, 02:46:31 UTC

ROFL! Face started out as a prompt that was just "Make Dean, Jensen, and Alec have sex somehow." :P So it started out as a silly little PWP but it definitely grew into much more... so it was entirely a silly premise but I'm glad you gave it a chance and liked it anyway :P

*hugs* Thank you so much!