A Reel of Film to the Light

[hungrytiger11]

Title: A Reel of Film to the Light
Author: hungrytiger11
Rating: G/ gen
Characters: Shikamaru
Notes: Spoilers up to Kage Summit Arc. A (rather late) gift!fic for okroginator, who asked for Shikamaru on responsibility. I hope this works for you. It is stand-alone, but it does contain vague references back to A Rose Bloomed.
Summary:

Comments

[premium_shaday]

D: That's so sad!!

Good writing, you heart breaker...

[troldtog]

*Applause* It's a lovely story!

I'll leave the nit-picky grammarian stuff here for you to look through if you like. The only comment I had there that's really worth mention elsewhere is that I'd suggest finding a word other than "feasible", which has connotations that aren't well-suited to the context you're using it in.

[troldtog]

err..."here" should be a link, but for some odd reason I can't get it to work. Uh, go where I linked you for the little things on An Eye for an-.

[hungrytiger11]

Thank you; I did check that out and make some changes too.

I'm glad you liked the story.

[sinemoras09]

Oh wow. This is gorgeously written and just so sad. Really haunting work.

+mem :)

[hungrytiger11]

Thank you.

[katakokk]

This is excellent, bb! ♥ You write Shikamaru very well, and it tears my heart into little pieces all the time.

[hungrytiger11]

Thanks!

[dayadhvam_triad]

Their emotions, like Uchiha's, were film in the light-blotted out when you most wanted to clearly see.
This line is still my favorite. It is hard to describe why, other than that I find it a beautiful comparison. :)

[hungrytiger11]

:) Thanks!