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hungrytiger11

Embarrassment, Table for One?

Nov 01, 2009 19:20

Title: Embarrassment, Table for One?
Author: hungrytiger11
Rating: G
Characters: Team Gai
Summary: Forget flying kunai, surprising blood limits, or enemy nin. Neji was going to die from embarrassment first. Hyuuga-centric.

( Why did he get the feeling he was being laughed at? )

hyuugacest, team gai, fanfic, fandom:naruto, character:tenten, character:lee, hyuuga-centric, character:gai

Comments 22

ambersolace November 2 2009, 03:09:49 UTC

This was adorable. ^^ I don't even ship hyuugacest or LeeTen (it seemed like LeeTen, but excuse me if my sleep-deprived brain is making things up), but I really liked it. All of the characters are very believable, and the situation is quite amuzing, as are Neji's reactions and worries about it.

"As this was, more or less, exactly what it had taken for Neji to see something special, he wisely didn’t comment on that and, aiming vaguely for comfort..." And that line was win. Epic win and I laughed very hard.

hungrytiger11 November 2 2009, 03:24:28 UTC

What a gorgeous Hinata icon!

And thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. It is ...sort of... Tenten-> Lee. I sort of wrote about how I think she has a crush on him at one point and later gets over it and is very embarrassed about this youthful mistake (unnngh! bad pun is bad.) Anyway, this story shows some of the conversation about the crush...

ambersolace November 2 2009, 03:42:03 UTC

Thank you! I loved making it; everything fit together perfectly.

Ah, okay, so my sleep-deprived brain was only slightly making things up. Oh, dear, youthful mistake. XD That was a bit of a bad pun. But, going back to the fic, I think you should make a second part. It would be very amusing to see what went on at the dinner.

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Re: Wish I had a Hinata icon too... XD hungrytiger11 November 2 2009, 04:35:11 UTC

Oh, I like this icon with Kakashi being all teacher-like :)

I'm so glad you found Team Gai believable! Their voices are always tricky, so it is nice to know they sounded IC.

Oh, crushes! Being a teen is so hard; you are just so much emotions and no clue how to do anything about them.

PS I don't if you were interested, but there is a memory button for any lj entries of yours or others that when you press it, it remembers it like a "favorites." I use it all the time; there's so many good stories and interesting entries people make! and, um not to sound too much like self-advertising but I have anFF.net account if you prefer that layout....

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hungrytiger11 November 2 2009, 12:45:54 UTC

Gai makes more sense, now that I look closer. He's more.... teacherly, you know? Well, Kakashi did not strike me as that much of a teacher, but then, it is his first team....

megyal November 2 2009, 14:34:07 UTC

Oh I loved this; everyone was so in-character and I'm particularly pleased with the descriptions of Gai's tenacity. Wonderful work!

hungrytiger11 November 2 2009, 18:52:31 UTC

Thanks for reading it!

fujiko1601 November 3 2009, 12:45:34 UTC

I can see his team doing something like this. They are a crazy bunch this team Gai.

hungrytiger11 November 3 2009, 18:59:58 UTC

They are crazy, but that's what makes them fun to play with!

Thanks for reading btw. :)

lapetitecosette November 3 2009, 16:23:16 UTC

LOL This was so adorable! Definitely made me laugh! :D

hungrytiger11 November 3 2009, 18:59:10 UTC

Oh good! Thanks for reading it too. :)