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The Losing Bet

Oct 02, 2009 15:53

Title: The Losing Bet
Author: hungrytiger11
A/N: Originally for the Naruto Gen meme. Prompt was what does Rock Lee think of Sasuke.First time writing Rock Lee. YOSH!

( A bet, that's what it started out as. )

character:sasuke, fandom:naruto, fandom, character:tenten, character:rock lee, character:neji, fanfic

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hungrytiger11 October 3 2009, 13:42:23 UTC

YAY!

I'm so glad you like it then. :)

anonymous October 3 2009, 05:24:44 UTC

LEE IS SO AWESOME!
that was awesome!
it sorta got me confused because i haven't read shippuden yet, so it spoiled it for me.
that was really good though!

nikonplix October 3 2009, 05:27:10 UTC

the anonymous was mine :)

hungrytiger11 October 3 2009, 13:39:09 UTC

Yay! Gen memes are so much fun, aren't they? I loved reading everything people did.

Anyway, thanks for commenting on this here too.

rose_in_shadow October 3 2009, 13:09:39 UTC

Very nice. I don't read a lot of Lee fic because his voice is hard to pin down--but you nailed it. Just the right amount of exuberance and seriousness that I think he would have about this situation. Well done!

hungrytiger11 October 3 2009, 13:38:15 UTC

Your icon! Oh, wow. Too funny!

I'm so glad you think I got him down. His mix of exuberance and seriousness/earnstness is so adorable but I wasn't sure if I got it right. Thanks for reading too!

indira14 October 3 2009, 15:09:39 UTC

Wow - that was a really introspective read. I loved how you captured Lee's thoughts - there's a hint of his rambunctious personality, mixed with seriousness. It's nice to see him so serious for once - you did a great job on this!

hungrytiger11 October 3 2009, 20:02:01 UTC

Eee! your icon! Its little Hinata, having nightmares about creepy people trying to kidnap her and Neji-niisan telling her it's all right!

Thanks btw!