Evidence of What You Cannot See (Repeated Ten Times)

[hungrytiger11]

Author: hungrytiger11
Title: Evidence of What You Cannot See (Repeated Ten Times)
Characters/pairing: Sasuke, some Sasu/Saku but mostly gen
Summary: Ten visitors to the same hospital room.
A/N: Written for indira14 who wanted more Sasu/Saku stuff. I don’t think this is exactly what you were talking about but I tried, and it's waiting for you to get back

Comments

[laurelsblue]

This is absolutely brilliant.

I love the way you split it into the different people visiting him and his reactions to them. The bit with Karin and Suigetsu was my favourite. The reminder of Karin's role in Sound was particularly nice because that aspect of her seems to get forgotten a lot.

The interaction between him and Sakura was incredibly well-written as well.

[hungrytiger11]

Yay! Thank you!

That seems odd that part of Karin's history is overlooked, though until this I hadn't looked at her too closely, but now the scientist!Karin is my favorite. She's hardcore and smart too.

[anonymous]

Wow. Very well written, emotional ... incredible. When I reached Part X I was expecting a visit from Itachi's ghost and a tragic ending. When Naruto said, "Gaara found him when we were securing the Akatsuki base." my heart jumped ("Itachi's eyes!!") I'm so glad you gave Sasuke a happy ending.

Thank you for sharing your story - I love it!

zhusanna

[anat_astarte]

This absolutely amazing! I really love how you had everyone interacting with Sasuke, each segment was fantastically thought out and well-executed! I also love the slow evolution of Sasuke's experiences, beautiful work ♥

I've wanted to read something like this for a long time, and now I really want the way you have it all right here to be canon so much ♥

[hungrytiger11]

Thank you so much.... and wow, really pretty icon!

[anat_astarte]

You're welcome....and thank you!

[ailuchan]

This is so. Freaking. Awesome.

I have no words, really.

But I'm gonna pull them out because you deserve a nice comment, 'kay?

It's incredibly well written. How you put different people visiting him and Sasuke's thoughts about them and blah. It's just amazing. Oh, Sasuke's thoughts. You were marvelous! The way you expressed them was so realistic, so Sasuke-ish. How you managed to place the story in the manga, how you wrote his answers and other people's questions, and the end! I love it.

This is an excellent job. And it's so going to my mems.

[hungrytiger11]

I think your my first entry into someone's mems! I feel very special. Thank you for reading.

[ailuchan]

Well, your entry is my first mem at all. Ahaha.
You're welcome. Thank you for writing! :D

[anonymous]

This was so well written that I came out of lurking-mode just to tell you. Brilliant piece, a pure joy to read. =)