Jaded

Oct 17, 2014 21:08

A/N: For @nonchabi-chabi-chabster unnir. <3 She gave me a picture, so I merely coloured it in. This is completely her idea, and she named it, too. (much fancy title, better than what I would have thought of lol) Thank you for letting me write it. :)

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Tiffany had told them, just seconds ago, that she was bored of her 5 year relationship. )

taeny, taeyeon, one-shot, fanfiction, tiffany, snsd

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anonymous October 17 2014, 13:36:21 UTC
/melts into a puddle/ This is amazinggggggg SWEETNESS OVERLOAD

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What a Sweet Romantic Taeny One-shot! yeo_64 October 17 2014, 14:53:45 UTC
My dear, dear friend, you have done it again, crafting another Beautiful Taeny tale, full of Love and Longing for us fans to enjoy reading :D. Kudos!
I Really Love how you added in Yoona to be the voice of reason here and how you effectively detailed the emotional "loss" that Tiffany felt as the days dragged on prior to Taeyeon's return home, clearly illustrating the adage that "absence does make the heart go fonder" :).
Sometimes it really needs a drastic change of routine to wake someone up to the realities of life without the "love of your life" ;).
Thank you very much for making my day and I will look forward to the next posted Taeny tale here. Kamsahamnida and Cheers!
Kenneth.

(P.S. Spotted some typos that you may want to fix (or not):
1) for Yoona would let the topic go - "Yoona to let the"?
2) that breakfast all ready for her in the kitchen - "breakfast was all ready"?
3) and woke up alone - "and wake up"?
4) making her realised she hadn’t said a word - "making her realize she"?)

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Sweet and very nice superman2601 October 18 2014, 03:04:39 UTC
HI there author,
Thanks for dis Jaded~ its reminds me nvr to take someone for granted.
And eventhou have been together for a long time.
Cherish every moment.
This is nice and sweet for me. Tiffany in dis story realises it only wen Taeyeon was away. But the one dat makes me feel so overflowin is Taeyeon in dis story as she didnt waver and continue with her love for Tiffany. Sweet. :):):)
Thanks for sharing. Need some sweetness in the life. :)

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from tipco09 anonymous October 18 2014, 05:54:22 UTC
You cruel author. I almost stopped breathing at the start of your story and god, the pain was like a hand squeezing my heart ❤. For a while there, I almost hated poor,understanding Yuri and imagined her having designs on Tiffany. Hahaha! Oh my possessive Taeny heart was so torn. Its a good thing you more than made up for all that by your sweet, fluffy ending. I totally love this piece.

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cute anonymous October 21 2014, 07:20:48 UTC
a litlle bit of reality and i like it... simple but well written ...i love it

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