Comments | humyourheart: All Yours, Too.

humyourheart

All Yours, Too.

Jan 22, 2013 14:15

Hi. o_o So this is sort of like an impromptu sequel... to the first one. I think I can call it that, but no, it is not an on-going. Anyway, it's over 1.8K words, and kinda random. And I haven't written in a while so it might be slightly lacking? I'm losing my touch, noooooooo. T_T I still hope you like it, though ( Read more... )

taeny, taeyeon, one-shot, seohyun, fanfiction, tiffany, snsd

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COMMENTS anonymous January 22 2013, 08:27:27 UTC

I really felt bad when Taeyeon said that she was lonely. This story of yours made me feel better because I've believed in the TaeNy bond for so long and I could not fathom how she could feel empty despite that. Your story provides a plausible and sweet scenario which I hope translates into real life. - tipco09

Re: COMMENTS humyourheart January 28 2013, 13:41:36 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it ^^

What A Beautiful Taeny One-shot ! yeo_64 January 22 2013, 09:05:37 UTC

My dear friend, that's a really Beautiful piece of Taeny fanfic that you've posted here, with just the right amount of sentimentality and fluff to engage the reader. Kudos !
I just Love how you crafted the entire early morning scenario, right down to Seobaby having a mini-fright when she accidentally noticed Tiffany on the living room couch :D.
Of course, her suddenly realising why her unnie was staying up so late, and giving a knowing grin to herself, makes the narrative all the more sweet.
Good job on describing the verbal interactions between the 2 protagonists on the couch; I can almost believe that this happens in reality too ;).
All in all, a Big Congratulations is in order for your latest piece of fanfic, my dear friend :).
"Have you lost your touch ?" Not by a long shot, in my humble opinion :D.
Until your next fanfic post then, Cheers !
Kenneth.

(P.S. Only 1 typo to fix (or not):
She chuckled, taking control on her hand and run her fingers through the girl’s hair again - “ran her fingers”?)

Re: What A Beautiful Taeny One-shot ! humyourheart January 28 2013, 13:42:07 UTC

Thank you. ^^ I'm glad you liked this. Good to know I haven't lost it. Hehe. See you next time? :)

awww p9sone January 22 2013, 09:40:47 UTC

afdgjakxgajdllagK ITS SO FLUFFY IM GONNA DIE >_<
and it's always nice to have someone who always waiting for us :'>
i hope in real life ty will never feel lonely again if soshi always around her. :D
thanks for this fluffy oneshot. sorry for my bad grammar. *bow* :)

Re: awww humyourheart January 28 2013, 13:42:58 UTC

I hope so too. I always want them happy, all of them. Sigh. Anyway you're welcome. ^^ And thanks for commenting :D

Thank you lord! ext_1501236 January 22 2013, 13:19:17 UTC

(and thank you author-nim, haha)

Been waiting for someone to write one based on ty's comments on sketchbook... this is so sweet :)

Re: Thank you lord! humyourheart January 28 2013, 13:43:22 UTC

Haha! You're welcome xD Hope you liked it. ^^

ah_thien January 23 2013, 01:38:04 UTC

Awe; i still can't get over Taeyeon's expression when she admitted to be feeling lonely..

Btw; you haven't lost your touch! The story was adorable!

Happy late New Years to you!

humyourheart January 28 2013, 13:44:31 UTC

Yeah, me too. :( It's so sad to hear that, which was why I wrote this. To make myself feel better. LOL. I really do hope she feels better though.

And thanks! ^^ Glad you liked it. :D

ah_thien May 20 2013, 05:07:15 UTC

Sorry for the late reply, been busy..

She seems to be quite bubbly lately. so hopefully shes doing better.

& you're welcome!~ ^^