Little grammar/spelling nitpicks though I think when you said "Ostensive" for when they were going to the charity fair you meant "ostensibly" and "brining" you meant "bringing"
Wonderful chapter, hun! I'm always *so* happy to see an update on this! It's great to see the boys finally get to start the renovations, and I love the idea of Junior coming out there for school. And Heph's hair? Priceless. I just adore Heph and Jake, pretty much just as much as Jack and Ennis now. Their relationship is beautiful to watch develop. Thanks so much for sharing!!
I've just finished reading 1 thru 38 and I love the little AU you've created. It's nice to see Bobby flourish as a teen. This has got such a good feel to it and I love the ensemble of characters you've created around the Twist/Del Mar storyline.
You have given it a very different feel to HI and TCJ which is a testament to you because I know how easy it is to fall back in something familiar. It's great that you had a base from which to write from but you have made it your own and have dine a great job.
I am curious to see what Booby has coming in his own pursuit of love as well as Merc and Junior. However, I think my favourite young people in love has to be Jake and Heph. They are just too cute.
I am so looking forward to your next installment. I hope it is VERY soon.
Comments 12
Little grammar/spelling nitpicks though I think when you said "Ostensive" for when they were going to the charity fair you meant "ostensibly" and "brining" you meant "bringing"
Reply
Reply
You have given it a very different feel to HI and TCJ which is a testament to you because I know how easy it is to fall back in something familiar. It's great that you had a base from which to write from but you have made it your own and have dine a great job.
I am curious to see what Booby has coming in his own pursuit of love as well as Merc and Junior. However, I think my favourite young people in love has to be Jake and Heph. They are just too cute.
I am so looking forward to your next installment. I hope it is VERY soon.
Sandy
Reply
I know it is bad but I often forget to comment on your wonderful work. I was just re-reading your fic when I realized I hadn't commented.
Write more!
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment