New Torchwood Fic: Judas Kiss, PG

[hull1984]

Title: Judas Kiss
Author: hull1984
Rating: PG
Spoliers: Up to and including Dead Man Walking
Disclaimer: I own nothing but a vague sense of unease and a wistful longing for Cheetos.
Summary: How things might had gone in Dead Man Walking if Tosh was having a particularly trying day...
Author's Notes: I started this directly after watching Reset and

Comments

[pinkfairy727]

This is mint! I think you portrayed everybody's emotions very well. Thanks for sharing :c)

p.s. I think I should probably attend a comma help group as well :S

[hull1984]

Thank you!

Your comment came as a real relief! I was very nervous about posting this - angst isn't my usual thing and I was worried about how it came across.

Oh and the inaugural meeting of CAA (Comma, Abusers Anonymous,,) will be at 7.30pm next Tuesday ;),

[pinkfairy727]

I'll be there. Will there be tea and biscuits? ;c)

[thrace_adams]

Oh wow! Really well done! Excellent job.

[hull1984]

Thank you. Your lovely comment has put a very silly smile on my face :)

[oximore]

Whoa! Great fic :D even if I really can't imagine Tosh hurting Ianto...

I loved it :D

[hull1984]

Thank you.

And I actually agree completely - I don't think Tosh would have been able to truly hurt Ianto (at one point I even toyed with the idea of having her shoot him before she finally came to her senses but it just didn't seem right).

[oximore]

"I even toyed with the idea of having her shoot him before she finally came to her senses"

It could be interesting :) but she would probably have shot herself after that... (or Jack would do it!)

Great job anyway!

[wicca_faith_fi]

i think this is very good, it would have been a perfect edition to the episode.

[hull1984]

Thank you, what a lovely thing to say.

[omni_chan]

I loved it!

And I will join this comma help group with you. XD

[hull1984]

Thank you.

See comment, above re the inaugural, meeting of CAA (Comma, Abusers Anonymous,,) ;),