To Have and To Hold Ch 2

[hugsuzie]

‘Well it sure is a small world!’ The words shocked Jack out of his stupor. They came from beside him at the bar and seemed to be directed at Jack so he raised his head. What in the world? Who was this guy? Was that a tattoo under his leather jacket?

‘If it aint Jack Twist. Jeez! You look like your Daddy!’

How the hell would his father know a

Comments

[lovewithstands]

I hope this is not the ending of this wonderful story and if it is I hope you consider doing a sequel.

[hugsuzie]

I'm glad you like it. Maybe some day I'll take the boys over to California... who knows!

Sx

buenas noches

[carmenmariabs]

Ennis seems to have made a decision Jack.
Alma with her wedding,.... her wedding night with Jack.

Thank you.

carmen

Re: buenas noches

[hugsuzie]

...And I think we all agree that is the RIGHT decision!

Sx

[brokeback1963]

Erotic and touching, just BEAUTIFUL.

You're gonna write more of this, right? Maybe are they gonna go to SF? Pretty please? Yes? **puppy eyes**

Thank you for this. I love it.

Much love.

Tammy.

[hugsuzie]

*Tries to avoid being trapped by puppy eyes*

They could go to SF couldn't they? What a time to be a cowboy in California! I'm so glad you liked it Tammy.

Sx

[ifyoucantfixit2]

Too bad that was not the end of the OS. It would have been a much happier ending. A beautiful story. Thank you very much.
Janice

[hugsuzie]

Thanks for reading Janice. I'm glad you liked it
I suppose I always want a happy ending...

Sx

[camillar]

Thanks for this! This is the way it should have happened :( I really like your writing style, it's very good!
Camilla

[hugsuzie]

But if it happened like this would we be so in love with the story?

I'm glad you enjoyed Camilla it and like my writing, though I think I still have a long way to go...

Sx