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[butterflyweb]

Two pairs of dark eyes meet his across the small clearing, rising from concealed spaces to reveal themselves and their weapons-almost antiquated plasma rifles-raised and ready to fire. Changmin feels a small spike of fear drive through him, for once letting it show on his features.

I’m a kid, he thinks desperately, as if willing the thought to

Comments

[machine_of_july]

I love this fic, it's so amazing. I can't believe how wonderfully you've built up the setting and characters. It's heavy and intense and I loooove the action sequences! I am so hooked, I love stories where I have no idea what the hell kinds of twists the plot is going to take.

Yunho. Changmin... I don't even have anything to say, other than I hope to catch the next installment as soon as possible!

So much love ♥♥♥♥♥

[butterflyweb]

Thank you so much! That means so much to both of us, you have no idea. And please, keep reading! Next chapter should be up shortly. :)

[kurogoma]

Yunho is so full of regrets. If a second chance is offered to him to make amends I hope he grabs it. I don't know how he is going to figure out Changmin is not dead, but I sure am looking forward to him going after Min.

Love your characterisations, and hope to see the JaeMinChun develops.

[rawthorne]

Yunho has a lot to make up for and this journey might actually do him good, who knows?

Thanks for the review and we hope you'll keep reading.

[murderfanta]

Hey!
I've just finished reading and i really like your fic ;)
This chapter was...woow ahahah~~
JaeChunMin...ummm i wonder what will happened... :s

Waiting for the next chapter *O*
Good job ♥

[butterflyweb]

Thank you so much for commenting! Hope you keep reading and enjoying :)

[murderfanta]

oh ummm I would like to know what is OT5 ..??
(sorry I'm french ^^" don't know this word :s)

[butterflyweb]

OT5 is basically shorthand for all five of the boys paired together. orgy goodness anad all that :)

[dreaminthepast]

0.o It's like watching tv and all you want to scream is "BUT HE'S NOT DEAD!!!"

The story's unfolding in such an amazing fashion. I can't wait to read the next chapt, and the fight scene was intesly incredable.
Awesome job!

^^

[rawthorne]

Isn't it just? :)

Thanks for the feedback, it means a lot to us both.