Acts of Contrition (18/20)

[rawthorne]

The corridor is bathed in light and heat. Jaejoong tastes bile in his mouth, but he's got more pressing things to worry about. Like the fact that he can't breathe.

It feels like a boot is pressing down on his chest, cutting off his air supply. His diaphragm protests the way it's been constricted, his eyes mouth too, drawing horrible, shaky gasps

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[xiahtic]

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[timbong]

That kept me plastered on the edge of my seat every second of reading it. It was simply amazing, all of it, and I know now that I fail in comparison to your writing ability, that's for sure.

[audient]

......................................

it seems like

I'm always rendered very

super

speechless.

...

what a twist. fuck.

[cruel_disorder]

Okay, my mind is completely incoherent and I can't come up with a long speculation anymore >_O Plus it's nearing the end and I just want to sit back and fully enjoy it without coming up with theories. It's past the point of theories I think XD;

But jesus. This chapter. Aaaagh! Jaejoong T_T! WHAT IS GOING ON? I'm completely confused but it just makes me anticipate the last two chapters more. Seriously, you two, I'm so impressed. ♥ I mean, have you ever thought of writing stories with original characters? I'd love to read your original work as well as your fanfics ♥