Acts of Contrition (16b/20)

[rawthorne]

Yunho freezes for a moment, eyes wide with surprise, and then he's pushing back, gently, trying to put some distance between them. "What the hell do you think you're doing?" Is this how they moved in on Changmin, he wonders? Come to bed with us and we'll trust you?

Jaejoong sighs, darting in to rest his lip against a pale throat, speaking in

Comments

[machine_of_july]

Aight so there was a lot going on in this chapter... and I truly appreciate it, but holy hell, so fucking damn incoherent because my brain fails at the sex and oh my God was it ever wonderful and ahdlasdhjkldjhdkjh omguuuuhhhh I think I need a new brain now.

Srs that was one of the hottest things I've read in a while. OMG. So much love and *spazflaildies*

♥♥♥!!!

[rawthorne]

Breathe. That's my advice. :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[theresa_lynne]

Umm. Damn. That was hot. But I'm seriously missing the Min. I hope Min and Su are getting "reaquainted" during all this time. Hahaha. ;)

This story just gets better and better, even though chapter 15 confused me a bit. I have no doubt that you'll piece it together in the end. Wonderful job!!

[audient]

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fdlkgf

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wow. *breathes* wow. wow.

DX wow.

(will there ever be a JaeSuChun scene ; ;)

[timbong]

Brilliant, just fucking Brilliant. I really don't think I can say much more except that this is easily my favorite fanfic... ever. And I don't throw words like that around too easily. I hardly ever comment on stories these days, so the fact that I comment should say enough, but this story is brilliant.

[timbong]

Actually, I would love to work with the two of you on a story or a series of stories or something; like a collection of stories based on themes. Please let me know

[blessedangel13]

GUH

*DIES*

Sorry, I never have coherent comments. <3333