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[gala_apples]

Title: Grief
Rating: pg13
Disclaimer: these characters belong to JKR
Pairings: Zacharias/Justin, Zacharias/other Hufflepuff
Wordcount: 1030
Warnings: vague mentions of chan, death of Cedric
Summary: Everyone deals with grief in a different way. The Hufflepuffs try to help Zacharias with his.

Comments

[hpsauce]

omg!
gala! i love it!
it's angsty and beautiful and gah!
happyhappyhappysiab!

erm, okay, eloquence. it made me sad, which i take as a good thing with fic. i felt so terribly for justin, being there and taking everything that zach dishes out and feeling helpless about his little brother and zach. i loved the realistic mourning and anger from zach - it's boyish and that is always a plus in my book. and i liked the bits about childhood development in it. it really fitted well and didn't make me make the O_o face...:D
in conclusion, it was touching and realistic and i loved it *mwah*

[gala_apples]

i'm so glad that you love it. only for you would i write angst. somehow, at least 80% of the time i write for you, i write angst. how does that happen? at least when you write for me, i make you write porn. that's what the world needs more of, porn, not angst.

child development sneaks into everything i do. i was watching qaf with a friend and started bitching that by the end of the show gus is 5, and he STILL DOESN'T TALK. 2 year olds talk! not a lot, but some. (i could rant for so long on this topic, honestly). i'm glad you didn't make the 0.o face, i told you it wasn't child porn!

[misanagi]

This was wonderfully written. I liked very much this look at Zacharaias which is a character I don't quite get yet so I enjoyed this look through Justin's eyes very much and everything that is implicit in the piece. Very nice!

[gala_apples]

thank you. i like to think there's some reason he dislikes harry yet helps him besides the obvious Harry Good-Voldemort Bad thing. so why not have it be he misses his boyfriend and partially blames Harry, irrationally or not.

thanks for commenting!

[gala_apples]

definitely more puffs. i nearly wrote one for the hp_unfaithful fest, but i couldn't finish in time. i'll be posting it soon.

and consider yourself fangirled back. i sneak-read your fic without commenting because your writing is "smarter" then mine (the midsummer scorpius, for example) and i tend to be meek around those whose writing i admire.

[gala_apples]

thanks for the comment. sometimes i enjoy writing something by not writing it.