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thrace_adams August 3 2007, 19:57:39 UTC
I just started reading this and wow...sucked in already. Unfortunately I have a toddler and cannot do marathon reading sessions so can only do a little at a time, but read the first two chapters and was totally engrossed. Very intrigued by what hit their house and Lois idea. Looking forward to reading more.

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htbthomas August 4 2007, 00:48:07 UTC
Oh, excellent! It makes me happy to no end when I get a new reader!

Just read it as you have time, and I hope to hear your thoughts as you go along. *kiss*

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thrace_adams August 21 2007, 19:59:52 UTC
Finally was able to get back to this and pound down chapters 3 & 4...and yeah, potty training my son has worn down my brain, I finally get the Deja Vu reference...Lois is having flashbacks to before...really well done..anxious to see why the diamonds in the jeweler's window caused her to swoon! Loved the fire scene...the image of him in the suit against the red blaze...HOTNESS!!!! Great job!

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htbthomas August 21 2007, 20:11:33 UTC
Oh yeah, potty training is a big drain... I remember! We're still dealing with issues here and there and it's been over a year!

Anyway, thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it. The whole idea of deja vu is what started the story off, it was tricky keeping it going as time went on, though. :D

Read on when you can!

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rukia_princess September 3 2010, 03:11:34 UTC
Wow, a great start! I'm off to read more!!!

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htbthomas September 3 2010, 23:10:33 UTC
Thanks for reading this... and commenting! I love it when people find this story. ♥

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