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POETRY: Obsession (Dave♠Karkat)
Aug 11, 2011 00:39
Creator:
anonosity
Title: Obsession
Cliche: Obsession
Rating: T
Trigger Warnings (if applicable): Suicide mentions?
Summary: Karkat hates Strider so much, even his eyes colour shows it.
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He hated him.
)
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razulude
August 17 2011, 02:51:37 UTC
Ooh, I liked this! I especially liked the comparison of Dave's red eyes and Karkat's soon-to-be-red eyes. You did the obsession thing good. I could really feel Karkat's anger/longing for Dave. I'm also a sucker for poetry. x3
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