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FIC: High Tea with the Duke of Pastries (Bro♥Mom)

Aug 12, 2011 11:49

Creator: viewtiful_jeff
Title: High Tea With the Duke of Pastries
Cliche: Age-down
Rating: Probably PG-13 - R for some swearing.
Trigger Warnings (if applicable): Swearing?
Summary: One of Dave's time turntables breaks. If you'd think it'd be hard for that to affect Mom and Bro two years prior, you clearly don't pay very much attention to this comic.

( It took a lot to knock Bro Strider on his ass. )

Comments 2

teh_stripe August 12 2011, 16:22:44 UTC

There is a lot to love about this story, but I think my favorite bits are the ones that show the parents' relationship towards their children. Rose's pamphlet on tooth decay and Dad holding off on braces for John just feel so beautifully in character. Your interactions between Mom and Bro are brilliant as well, and they seem spot on even though the two have never spoken in canon.

Great job!

milkfed August 20 2011, 18:28:24 UTC

this is an AU i want to see more of ; ~ ;