To Norinoricat, from Coolchan.

[feliciakain]

Title: And So, The Stereotype is Broken
Medium: Fanfiction
Pairing: Josh/Metis
Summary: There are three rules to being a jock. 1) You have to get along with girls. 2) You can't suck. 3) You can't be gay. Josh is pretty good with one and two, but three's getting to be a bit of a problem.
Partner: norinoricat
Author's Notes: It was a cool prompt and my

Comments

[solidbaby]

I love how this story is so full, but doesn't feel rushed. Nicely done ^^

[coolchan]

Oh, that's a relief. I always feel like my short stories are rushed; I'm glad this one isn't. C:

[ruins_of_sodom]

Th-that was awesome. O: Great job! And pretty damned realistic. The ending was pretty quirky. (Made me think of Highschool the Musical in a very Honeydew Syndrome way.) Awesome work.

[coolchan]

Yay, it's realistic. :D I was worried about that, since I have no idea how the inner dynamic of the jock group works. ...only that the majority of them come off as idiots and there's a few that are nice. (I actually know a guy that looks and acts a bit like Josh, which is cool.)

[ruins_of_sodom]

Does he have a hot boyfriend-sort-of-not-person like Metis? : D? *dork*

[coolchan]

I have no idea. I haven't seen him date anyone, so maybe. *shot*

[norinoricat]

I approve :)

[fullmoon225]

I liked it, it really flowed well.

[omgitsasquirrel]

That was really cool, I love how you made Metis show how emotional he was, and poor Josh. I loved the story, good job.(: