Fic for scarlet_malfoy: Balances (Sirius/Remus)

Nov 07, 2007 20:00

Author/Artist: marseverlasting
Giftee: scarlet_malfoy

Title: Balances
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Sirius/Remus, Sirius/others
Era/Time-Frame: Marauders
Rating: PG
Summary: The scales have always been tipped, one way or the other; most of the time it's away from Remus, and sometimes he tries to tip them back.
Warnings: angst, woe, sorrow, etc.

Author's Notes: I'm sorry this ( Read more... )

round 4, fic

Leave a comment

Comments 2

scarlet_malfoy November 8 2007, 23:45:55 UTC
Ahhhhh!!!!

So wonderful! So sad. I know I didn't give you much to go on, but I love being surprised, and this was truly amazing.

I loved the PinterMoment!moment. How did you know I loved that reference??

I absolutely love all of the dialogue sequences. It leaves so much up to the imagination, and a lesser writer than you wouldn't have been able to make it work, but it's wonderful and I could see them and hear them perfectly.

Sirius especially was wonderful. That room was portrayed amazingly, I could see it and smell it and I really really sympathized with Remus quite a lot, throughout. James' portrayal was great... good James in a R/S fic is hard to come by, and I loved him. I loved the closeness of Remus and James, how they could comfort each other. I'd love to read about the punch, haha.

Thank you so much for this! I enjoyed it so much! ♥♥♥

Reply


shadowclub January 19 2008, 02:47:27 UTC
Wow, this was beautifully written. Sirius was so broken and yet strong and Remus was just like I've always imagined him.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up