FIC: The One In Which Boys Are Embarrassed And Palms Are Sweaty

[sparkysparky]

Title: The One In Which Boys Are Embarrassed And Palms Are Sweaty (Or: Why It Doesn’t Pay To Be Late To Dance Lessons)
Author: sparkysparky
Rating: R-ish (I couldn’t quite write 14 year olds shagging, but I was rather more explicit than a PG-13 rating warranted. If there was a 16+ rating it would be more appropriate)
Challenge: Favorite (Movie) Canon Moments:

Comments

[shocolate]

Bloody giant, Harry thought, though not in irritation. He loved that Ron was taller and broader than he was. He’d never admit it to Ron, but he always felt protected when Ron held him.

*nods*

Though, if it had, Harry quite thought he’d be turned off sex for life.

LOL

his natural inclination to let Ron take charge tried to assert itself

Awww!

Well tiptoed through year four - a dodgy era to try and write!!

[sparkysparky]

Thank you! 4th year fics are tricky. I fool myself by saying "they're really in 6th year! You just made a typo!" lol. But my brain believes me. However, I really couldn't get to the sexin'. That would have been...not cool.

Thank you for reviewing, and picking out 3 of my favorite lines! :-D

[hedwigs_bane]

I wuld so love to play both the boys in poker. I have a feeling I'd know every card in their hands byt the looks on their faces. LOL

Very nice story. At least at the next dance lesson they can cut loose a bit. Of course, McGonagall might have to throw a bucket of cold water over them to stop the dirty dancing, but that culd be fun, too. :-)

[sparkysparky]

Harry would totally lose all his fortune in poker. We'd walk away soooooooo rich. Actually...someone should write a story where Neville wins all the money because Dean&Seamus and Harry&Ron are too busy thinking about shagging to actually put forth a good effort. *snigger*

Thank you for commenting! And DOOD! You totally know that McG is pulling for the boys. She's so amused and like, "Really, did you think I wouldn't know" in her head.

[elladarcy]

*giggle*

I can just see someone finding it amusing to transfigure Harry's clothes into a ballgown.

This is so cute... of course Molly would make the boys take lessons! She would never pass up an opportunity to make them cultured young men... while driving them crazy at the same time!

[sparkysparky]

OMG Ballgown!Harry. Don't think I won't. I've already done cross-dressing Valentine's smut. I'm not above a little girly!Harry at the Yule Ball.

And yes! My thoughts on Molly exactly! She knows her boys are rough and tumble types, but really. Can't blame her for trying.

[elladarcy]

Whew! That was... wow.

Haha... yeah. I think the only one ABOVE a little ballgown-wearing Harry at the Yule Ball is Ron, if you catch my drift.

[sparkysparky]

Glad you liked it. :-D And yes, I think I catch your drift, and it's a very nice drift. If the boys weren't 14. ;) And it's even pretty when they are, but I feel very dirty for thinking so.

[for_a_fantasy]

Hermione rolled her eyes, crossing her arms and giving them her idiot boys glare. "How long have you two been bloody shagging?"

Several people already in the common room looked up at Hermione's question, looking for all the world as if they were as interested in the answer as Hermione was.

"Hermione!" Ron said, shocked at her language, and pulled her away from the center of the room, Harry following along behind. "We're...we're..."

"Since the Second Task," Harry heard himself say, unaware where the urge to come out had come from. Ron looked at him shocked, his mouth dropped open in a little "O". Harry bit his lip and sent him an apologetic look.

OMG. Perfect. That part....so funny. Good job! :D

There's a grammatical error though...nearly at the end it says 'Ron had gotten closer to Harry by now, but they weren't touch.' It should be 'touching' instead of 'touch.'

[sparkysparky]

Thanks! I shall fix straightaway! And yay! I love Hermione. *squishes her* And also, thanks for quoting this particular part, seeing as the 2nd task dind't happen until after the Yule Ball, so I ought to change that.

Thank you!!

[for_a_fantasy]

Ooh I didn't even realize that. LOL Yes, go change it to the First Task, that would work well. :D

[sparkysparky]

:-D Obviously both I and my beta were sleeping or something. Or just having our brains eaten by the various RPs we're in. *snicker*

[bageldelight]

This was really cute, thanks for posting it!

[sparkysparky]

Harry/Ron are pretty much the cutest ship in HP. And that's why I love them so. :-D Because it's then.