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Darkest Before the Dawn-R-For Wave Three

Oct 25, 2006 20:00

Title: Darkest Before the Dawn.
Pairing: Harry/Ron
Rating: R
Challenge: Ron sees how self-destructive Harry is becoming, and realizes he must give up everything to save his friend.
Warnings: Angst, language, slightly disturbed Harry.
Words: 4857
A/N: Written for the third wave of the hprwfqf. Thanks to dream_wia_dream for the fabulous beta! Thanks to madam_minnie and dream_wia_dream for their ( Read more... )

round 3, 2006, satindolls, r

Comments 25

earth_dragon October 26 2006, 00:22:24 UTC

"We'll take care of each other, yeah?"

"Because without Ron there was no Harry and without Harry there was no Ron."

and that all sums it up right there! dark and hauting and moving at the same time!

tqpannie October 26 2006, 00:56:15 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

hpaa October 26 2006, 00:48:07 UTC

Seeing Harry go thru self destruction was horrible...
But am glad they figured it out in the end...

You captured the feeling of Ron's helplessness and Harry's rage very well...

And ofcourse we have smut to look forward too..YAY!! :D

tqpannie October 26 2006, 00:55:49 UTC

Thanks!

whatitistoburn1 October 26 2006, 01:20:59 UTC

Ahh I'm crying. This was so beautiful and dark and the ending was just gorgeous. Love this so so much ♥

tqpannie October 26 2006, 01:28:49 UTC

Thank you very much! I was nervous about posting it because there was no smut but I'm very happy you liked it!!

violet_star7 October 26 2006, 08:21:34 UTC

smut makes everything better ofcourse...but this was fabulous on its own. no need to be nervous at all. its a great fic, you can really feel harry's pain and vulnerablity. they need eachother...you got it exactly right. great piece.

dane_wiltshire October 26 2006, 01:21:22 UTC

Ron kept his eyes locked with Harry's and when Harry spoke again it was so soft Ron barely heard him.

"Help me," Harry whispered. "Help me."

:') Yep, it made me cry...but in a good way. I can't say much right now except: Exemplary.

tqpannie October 26 2006, 01:29:30 UTC

Thank you! *hands klenex*

I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

simons_flower October 26 2006, 01:53:05 UTC

You mean there isn't more angst? (Among the characters. I know the writer had lots of angst when writing :)

Aw! The end was fluffy. Nice job.

tqpannie October 26 2006, 03:07:37 UTC

Not too fluffy though because err...harry's not all better. He'll need help and there's still the whole ministry angle.

Thanks!