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The Plan

Nov 05, 2007 18:32

Story for: hprare_exchange
Title: The Plan
Pairing: Sirius/Lily
Rating: PG13
Summary: Sirius is just trying to help his best mate. It wasn't supposed to be like this. Inspired by Imogen Heap's "The Walk".

( You mean you don't want this labelled and sorted and defined? )

het, sirius, lily, sirius/lily

Comments 4

piartemis18 November 7 2007, 04:54:47 UTC

Good ending. I like the way you left it open, but I'd still like to see your take on what happens when James finds out...but no pressure. :) It's good the way it is, i guess.

Would've liked a little more of Sirius' point of view, since you write him so well. But Lily's good too.

msqu November 7 2007, 05:33:26 UTC

Ah! Abi! I'm totally flailing around here with all this unresolvement! I NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED continuation. Ah. Ah ah ah. I like that they're just so jumbled and intense with their emotions and how they're dealing with all of this mess, because it feels so much more real. The second half of this is just... just great. The end. Except that there needs tobe more story, so not the end, please?

Plz to be continuing.

shanaeplusb2 November 8 2007, 22:35:09 UTC

Gah! This is me absolutely dying Miss Abi.

I am in absolute and complete shock at how the end of this story turned out. Completely freaking brilliance. And confused and emotional and...

-sigh-

:) I loved it.

merlins_babe February 26 2009, 03:19:01 UTC

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