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Freckles

Oct 14, 2007 16:19

Story for: piartemis18
Title: Freckles
Pairing: Hannah/Neville
Rating: G
Summary: Neville is the Herbology professor at Hogwarts, but his life is still missing something. With the help of his old schoolmate and one of his students, he'll find out what. The question is, will he get it?

( She seemed to have forgotten why she was there. )

hannah, neville/hannah, het, neville

Comments 4

piartemis18 October 14 2007, 22:38:14 UTC

*grins* Neville is so amazingly in character. His kindness and awkwardness ("Sometime, do you think we could fall in love?" *dies*) is spot on.

I liked Hannah too. She knows Neville better than he knows himself, even before they give it a shot. It's easy to see why they would get along -- and also fight.

And they lived out their dreams. Hannah became Transfiguration teacher (yay) and Neville had his little freckled baby. I love happy endings. Thanks so much. This is awesome. :)

piartemis18 October 20 2007, 12:19:34 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! Neville is one of my favourite characters, so it was really fun to write (though I didn't expect it to go in the direction it did).

Also, this ship just became canon. *giggles* I got Hannah's job wrong (she turns out to be the landlady of the Leaky Cauldron), but they did get married after Hogwarts, according to Jo.

Well, I'm very happy that you liked it!

hazy_crazy October 22 2007, 13:09:25 UTC

"Sometime, do you think we could fall in love?"

That is one of the most beautiful lines I have ever read. And it's so completely, utterly and endearingly Neville. :)

I really enjoyed this - you wrote it well. I really liked Hannah's perception. Well done!

merlins_babe February 26 2009, 03:19:17 UTC

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