Fic Request Fulfilled for aggiebell90

[lissomelle]

Title: If You Love Someone
Author: deena_s
Beta(s): redhot_witch, miss_elisha
Rating: PG13
Word count: 2,185
Summary: "If you love someone, set it free. If he comes back, it was meant to be." After the war, Harry needs to know if he stayed away too long. Ginny needs to know if the man she loves is coming back at all...
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: All characters and settings

Comments

[aggiebell90]

Eeee!

Oh, I love it! Thank you so much, mystery author. It's not at all what I expected...and it's so much better than what I'd imagined.

I love the back and forth points of view and how Harry is so...Harry...and Ginny. I LOVE this Ginny. She's so strong.

This bit made me laugh:
I miss him.

He's a right selfish prat, but I love him.

Did I just say that aloud?

And I love this bit here:

"I need to know, Ginny…"

"Yes, I do."

She steps closer to me, her feet touching mine and her body up against me. I'm starting to feel dizzy as lecherous thoughts begin to fill my head.

"I haven't even asked you a question," I say.

"Yes, Harry, I missed you. Yes, Harry, I wish you didn't leave me. Yes, Harry, I've been waiting for you to come back. And yes, Harry…" She paused to put her arms around my neck. "I love you."

And

"We can wait. We've waited this long."I love the waiting theme you've woven throughout the whole fic. It fits that quote so well

[hpgwreply]

Thanks so much for the kind, kind words. I am so glad that you liked it. It's always a little difficult figuring out if the recipient will like it. I'm so relieved.
And also, thanks for the props regarding characterization. That is what I always strive for when I write, and thanks so much for noticing...

[jner]

This was amazingly poignant: "I miss her like a person misses a limb that's been amputated. You still have the feelings that used to be there even though that part of you is gone. Phantom…something."

I could feel it.

Well done.

[yellowitchgrl]

That was very sweet! I liked the exchange of POVs and getting to see it from both them and how it was mostly just emotions and thoughts. It was very powerful that way. Great job :-)

[quiet_discord]

WOW! I love this, it really shows how they're longing for each other during the war. I hope JKR doesn't do this to them though LOL. Great job!

[only_for_one]

I really liked this! You did the back and forth POV's really well :) Great job!