Comments | hpgw_ficafest: A Thin Line

snuggle_muggle in hpgw_ficafest

A Thin Line

Jan 31, 2007 13:40

Author: snuggle_muggle
Title: A Thin Line
Challenge: At Hogwarts, Envy and Lust
Summary: Harry envies Dean and lusts after Ginny. What's a boy to do?
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angsty fluff
Word Count (optional): 1700 or so
Notes/Warnings: Sexual themes, no language, nothing explicit

A Thin Line

The difference between Heaven and Hell, I believe, can be a ( Read more... )

5th wave:fic, author:snuggle_muggle, 5th wave

Comments 5

A Thin Line carrickorourke February 1 2007, 04:48:31 UTC

This was a great story. I really liked the imagery you used with walking a fine line between heaven and hell. You used some wonderful examples of heaven and hell intermingling. I would love to see a follow-up to this story and see Harry's perspective AFTER he and Ginny got together. I assume it was more heaven than hell until the end of HBP when they broke up. That was definitely on the hell side of the line. It would also be fun to have Ginny's perspective of that thin line between heaven and hell. As usual, you did a great job -- keep up the good work.

Re: A Thin Line snuggle_muggle February 2 2007, 19:04:56 UTC

Thank you so much for your nice comments. And I really like your idea of doing it from Ginny's point of view. I'll think about that for a while.

ladyg_funk February 2 2007, 16:16:10 UTC

Oh, I really liked how you not only used your prompts but also used the challenge theme "Heaven and Hell" in your fic. Thank you!

snuggle_muggle February 2 2007, 19:07:00 UTC

I really appreciate your taking the time to comment on my story as I know you are so busy. I am glad you liked the way it turned out. I knew others wouldn't be doing that, but when Harry started "speaking to me" this is what he had to say, so I just took careful notes. I really couldn't imagine writing this story any other way.

flyingcarpet February 3 2007, 04:31:14 UTC

Nice job! Perfect combination of Harry and Ginny, envy and lust, heaven and hell. :)