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The Sweet Taste of Desire

Jan 31, 2007 13:10

Author: carrickorourke
Title: The Sweet Taste of Desire
Challenge: At-Hogwarts, Gluttony and Lust
Summary: A Bill and Fleur Wedding Story, with lots of food and lots of snogging!
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Humor, Fluff -- sweet enough you might get cavities
Word Count (optional): 7170
Notes/Warnings: Lots of innuendo, plenty of snogging -- hey! the ( Read more... )

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Comments 11

ladyg_funk January 31 2007, 21:13:54 UTC

Your whole fic is in bold, so if you could please fix that, your readers and I would appreciate it. I didn't think that problem would warrant me rejecting your fic and you resubmitting it -- you're the only one who can edit the entry. Thanks!

carrickorourke January 31 2007, 21:36:35 UTC

All fixed. Sorry about that. I swear I do not know where that Bold came from. It must have been the title or something. Anyway, I appreciate your letting it go through. This has been lots of fun and I know you worked really hard.

ladyg_funk January 31 2007, 21:49:28 UTC

No problem. I just didn't want the bold text to deter people from reading and reviewing. (It probably was from the bold tag in your title.) Thanks for your participation!

snuggle_muggle February 1 2007, 03:04:18 UTC

You did a very nice job with this and I like the fact that it is fluffy and light. It seems that most of these stories have been very angsty, with a few exceptions, but yours was pure fluff all the way, and it was a fun read. You did a nice job with the prompt, too.

carrickorourke February 2 2007, 22:23:37 UTC

Thank you very much for your kind words. I do love fluff.

arlenerios February 1 2007, 04:21:42 UTC

Fun story! Good thing I was not eating or drinking anything when I was reading it!

carrickorourke February 2 2007, 22:24:12 UTC

Thanks a lot. It was fun writing this story and I'm glad you liked it.

liriop February 1 2007, 05:18:32 UTC

I loved this story very much. Not only because I love fluff, but because it's really a rare thing to see a H/G that expresses the same interpretation I have of their break up. Harry broke up with her, so that people wouldn't think of her as his girlfriend anymore. And she accepted it. And that's perfectly considered in the fic. I don't like when Ginny gets all vengeful or offended.
And besides, it's really funny.

carrickorourke February 2 2007, 22:27:34 UTC

We both agree. Ginny is better than some angry, vengeful girl. She understands Harry probably like no one else in the Potter universe.
I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks.