Fic: Harry's Distraction, NC-17

[tari3]

Author: Tari (tari3)
Title: Harry's Distraction
Challenge: Post-Hogwarts #55. Ginny has had a terrible day, she just wants to soak in the bath and relax. Harry has the same idea and suggests they share the bath.Summary: Harry and Ginny take a break from the world with a bath

Comments

[kinsfire]

Why does Ron insist that his sister die unwed? Preferably a virgin? There reaches a point where protection becomes control, and Ron has passed it.

Beyond that little annoyance at Ron (NOT at the story), it was a marvelously sexy little piece. I really enjoyed reading it.

[lor_z]

Very nice. ;) Loved the ending. And the mix of Sexy!Harry and canon-like Awkward!Harry was great. And anything with Sex and the City influences has got to be good! =)

[eimajunknown]

funny lines:
~~From that point on, Ron had been… not accepting of the situation, but he’d been much more tolerant of it. If by tolerant you meant that he ignored it, of course.
~~[Ginny]tried to turn as smoothly and enticingly as possible, so of course she managed to loose her balance and nearly hit her head on the hard edge of the tub. Not to mention that the bathwater seemed to grow a mind of its own as it splashed all over the place, including the bathroom floor.

but i really liked this line:
“You’re not a distraction,” he repeated. “You’re real.”

nice story

-eima

[brimac13]

Lovely. Although, when Ginny said she was just a distraction, there at the beginning, I got a bit queasey. But, then, the ending came and the queasey went away. Ok, more like the bathtub scene came, then the queasey went away and when the ending came fuzzy feelings set up camp. Still, lovely.

[lissa_maylee]

Just as good the second time.

I will always love that line of Harry's: "You're not a distraction. You're real." It's not very articulate (just like canon Harry), and yet I understand what he means perfectly.