Comments | hpgw_ficafest: FIC - THIRTY (2011) Part II

pettybureaucrat in hpgw_ficafest

FIC - THIRTY (2011) Part II

Dec 10, 2008 08:47

Title: Thirty
Author: pettybureaucrat
Prompt: 2011
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sex, lots of it. Mentions of past infidelities
Disclaimer: All recognizable characters and locations are the property of JK Rowling

( Thirty )

8th wave, author:pettybureaucrat, 8th wave:fic, fic warning:adult

Comments 4

alejandrasilva December 11 2008, 15:04:48 UTC

well i dont think we want to hear the HG´s promiscuity, but i find lovely that after all, they love each other with such a passion, it was good, but a bit risky of you...

virgie2x22 December 13 2008, 04:37:51 UTC

Well, not sure what the point was. Not to be mean about it or anything but if Harry or Ginny cheat I would think there would be a major reason not just things were hard. I can get over that for a good story though, there are a few great ones out there. For me the sex was weird. I found myself wondering if it was supposed to be comedic. I was either cringing or laughing every time they were together.

misspotter25 December 16 2008, 04:14:14 UTC

As much as I love old Harr/Ginny traditional only her and only him and they died together being their first it seems a little impossible given the world as it's is now and I like the way you described it friends with friends very highschool..they were in their twenties and like they said twenties are your craziers. I love it!! Very well written and a lot of smut just in the right places. Hilarius how Hermione changed after time and Ron became a prune lol I can actually see them being like that.
And the wood stuff was very original almost like viagra
Congrats on an amazing job!!!

anonymous February 1 2009, 04:10:39 UTC

*“Well, when I had to go potty,” Lily continued, “I went by Unca Percy’s old room and Teddy and Victoire were kissing. I thought he was hurting her, cause she was making a lot of funny noises.”

Ginny blushed as Lily rambled on, “And...and then, they stuck their tongues in each other’s mouff! And then, Victoire pushed Teddy against the wall and rubbed on him and he started moaning and then they saw me and told me to go away and...”

She was only eleven, but she already knew how to use her beauty.*

I didn't like the whole Harry-and-Ginny-sleeping-around thing, but I had to stop reading after that scene. The very thought of an 11-year-old acting like that is REVOLTING.