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Their First (Prompt: Awkward)

Nov 07, 2011 18:15

Title: Their First
Words: 100
Rating: G
A/N: as soon as I saw this prompt, this moment popped into my head. not sure I did it justice. hard to write with 2 kids demanding attention.

The ensuing silence was best described as awkward. Harry glanced around. Expressions ranged from awe to anger and even mischief. He gulped a few times. His eyes landed ( Read more... )

awkward, :author: danfan74

Comments 5

dukebrymin November 8 2011, 03:44:52 UTC

Nicely done. I imagine that it was exceedingly awkward--reminds me of the time I thought my (female) friend was going to kiss me on the cheek, and I turned the wrong way and got a rather unintended (and delightful) kiss right on the mouth.

danfan74 November 8 2011, 10:31:33 UTC

thanks.

I love that you feel the need to clarify that the friend was female. LOL

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danfan74 November 10 2011, 01:20:41 UTC

thank you very much. like I said in my A/N, it was the first thing that came to mind and I couldn't write anything else

writetress November 11 2011, 23:09:02 UTC

I never would have guessed you had 2 kids demanding attention. It's wonderful and well-written! :)

danfan74 November 12 2011, 10:33:33 UTC

thank you! luckily their ages are 8 and 5 so it's not constant attention but only nearly so ;)