Comments | hpgw100: Late (prompt: 'up')

ladywhizbee in hpgw100

Late (prompt: 'up')

Feb 01, 2011 21:37

Title: Late
Words: 100
Rating: PG-13
Author's Notes: This was written quickly and is unbeta'd so all errors are completely mine. :-)
Summary: If people were meant to pop out of bed, we'd all sleep in toasters. -Author Unknown

“Where’s my shoe?” Harry asks, searching under the bed. “Have you -?”

“By the bathtub,” Ginny says while trying to pull up her ( Read more... )

up, :author: ladywhizbee

Comments 11

dukebrymin February 2 2011, 03:00:29 UTC

Very nice--I can definitely picture them having a wonderfully unorganized life like that.

ladywhizbee February 2 2011, 13:57:43 UTC

Thanks! Certainly in their early married life...I envision that they would other priorities than being tidy...spending as much time together doing 'other' things comes to mind. And sleeping in a bit to long in the morning as well, of course. :-)

lyras February 2 2011, 05:26:04 UTC

Aw. :) Chaotic and lovely.

ladywhizbee February 2 2011, 13:59:57 UTC

Thanks! It's interesting doing these 100 word challenges and seeing what you can convey in so little space. Chaos (and being late) was definitely one of those things, but also that freedom of early married life. This was fun to do! Thanks for reading. :-)

pettybureaucrat February 2 2011, 22:55:12 UTC

Hmm, wand in the kitchen and shoes in the bathroom. I wonder just what they were up to last night? Well, it was probably perfect!

ladywhizbee February 2 2011, 23:10:32 UTC

And Ginny's shirt on top of the bedpost? Yes, you do have to wonder... ;-)

danfan74 February 6 2011, 14:51:47 UTC

we almost need a prequel to this. ;) I love the early years. There's so much chaos and romance and perfection about it.

ladywhizbee February 6 2011, 15:18:21 UTC

Hmmm...tempting...and I see this week's prompt, too. Hmmm... ;-)

alita258 February 19 2011, 22:54:18 UTC

This is strangely really sweet for me, and I'm not even sure if that was your point. But I found it sweet anyway, I guess a look into an common day in the life of Harry and Ginny does something to me. :D

ladywhizbee March 31 2011, 14:47:11 UTC

*Kicks LJ...HARD*

I'm soooooo sorry that I took so long to respond to your review--I had no idea it was here!

Thank you. I actually find it really sweet, too. There's something very moving about real life, and real situations, and as newlyweds I can COMPLETELY see Harry and Ginny sleeping as late as possible in the morning before heading off to work.

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this.