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He Promised (Prompt: Promise)

Jan 23, 2010 09:26

Title: He Promised
Words: 100
Rating: G
A/N: I'm back with my usual angst with this one.

“No! Harry! You promised me!” Ginny screamed upon seeing the lifeless form in Hagrid's arms.

She turned to her companions, pulled them close all the while whispering, “He promised me.”

Then the battle resumed. She no longer cared if she died; her only reason ( Read more... )

author: danfan74, promise

Comments 8

fbo66 January 23 2010, 22:15:49 UTC

Very anguished, but very good! :)

danfan74 January 24 2010, 00:05:38 UTC

yep, angst, that's me. LOL

thanks.

mollywheezy January 24 2010, 00:09:49 UTC

Wonderful! I really love what you did with this.

danfan74 January 24 2010, 01:36:00 UTC

we see so much from Harry's POV I thought Ginny needed her side told

racing_rain January 24 2010, 01:23:17 UTC

So angsty. But so beautiful too. :) I think Ginny would definitely have issues with Harry if he didn't come back. Thankfully, he did. :D Nice one!

danfan74 January 24 2010, 01:37:21 UTC

so much of my stuff is angsty I've just had recent detour is all. Ginny would have brought him back just to kill him herself. Glad you liked it.

dukebrymin January 24 2010, 03:48:23 UTC

How horrible for Ginny to see Harry and have to think that he broke his promise. Very well done.

danfan74 January 24 2010, 14:58:44 UTC

I can't even imagine what that must have been like. Luckily, it didn't turn out to be a Romeo and Juliet ending.