Wedding-Pride

Jul 07, 2008 21:46

 Title: Wedding
Other Characters: Lily Potter
Words: 100
Rating: G
Author's Note: My first drabble !!!

Lily Luna Potter laughed as her new husband dipped her playfully on the dance floor, and cameras flashed brightly capturing their first dance as husband and wife.

From across the room Harry and Ginny looked at the happy couple with pride in their eyes.

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:author: hglove, pride

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ginny88 July 7 2008, 22:43:47 UTC
The proud parents, I'm sure Harry/Ginny cried in their daughter's wedding :)

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hglove July 8 2008, 07:47:14 UTC
It must have been hard on them to see their only daughter get married. And I'm pretty sure Lily would be a daddy's girl :)

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i_phianassa July 8 2008, 01:13:40 UTC
Haha, wow, go read the last paragraph of this fic! ;)

Nice drabble!

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hglove July 8 2008, 07:46:03 UTC
Thanks for the link. It was a nice read. So I guess my idea wasn't that original. Why am I not surprised?
Oh well. I like your icon ;)

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iphifix July 8 2008, 10:34:38 UTC
Oh! I'm so sorry, my intention was not to say that you were unoriginal, just to laugh over the similarities of our two fics! I really did enjoy your drabble!!

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hglove July 8 2008, 11:17:50 UTC
And I liked your story.

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josawyer July 10 2008, 04:22:42 UTC
Good job! Very cute piece. It has a wistful feel that is very fitting for the story. There are a few minor technicalities with tense issues, but that's not a big deal.

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hglove July 10 2008, 17:04:26 UTC
Thanks! And yikes about the tense issues! I just decide to -as Ron would say- sod it and post it anyways...despite the fact that I knew I should work on it more

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