Brains for gala_apples [NC-17] -- RW/MC/AG

[hptriangles]

Title: Brains
Author: antoshevu
Recipient: gala_apples
Rating: A/NC-17
Ship: Ron/Michael Corner/Anthony Goldstein; Ron/Hermione implied
Warnings: slash; bondage; implied non-con. Brains. And Nargles.
Summary: Ron's dreaming. Anthony and Michael have some ideas how to wake him up.
Genre: PWP, pretty much, with some odd plotty bits and attempted humor.
Author's Note:

Comments

[flyingcarpet]

Wow, Antosha -- this was really intense! (although Luna's description works, too) I love Ron's voice here, it feels very teenagery, and the misdirection. I really thought at first that Ron was just trying to play off his own homosexual urges, but I love the idea that there was a lingering possession due to his contact with the brain in the Department of Mysteries. And trust you to inject a little Luna humor into an otherwise all-male affair. The Nargles were a great touch. :)

[mickawber_fics]

Thanks so much! Whether the... urges... came from Roderick or were merely revealed and exploited by him-that was a question I chose to leave open. gala_apples asked for this trio (among others), some bondage, some D/s, and, of course, brains.... And the Nargles showed me the way. Heh.

And yeah-trust me not to be able to keep Luna out of the mix. But she's so fun!

;-)

[mickawber_fics]

Oh. And I'm glad that you agreed with Luna's take on the goings-on, too!

[lyras]

Heh, that was fascinating - I wouldn't call it a PWP, exactly, because I found the backstory/plot really interesting. All those generations of Hogwarts ancestors...

I loved Ron's voice and his interaction with Antony and Michael (especially the 'eek' moments involving Ginny/Michael). Working the scars on his arms in there was a great idea.

I haven't read much Ravenclaw fic, but it was lovely to see Antony and Michael geeking out over research in a manner that rivalled Hermione. :) And of course, I loved your Luna: a little more predatory than I'm used to seeing her, but it's great to see her so in control here!

[mickawber_fics]

:-D

Yeah, I have to say, it was fun-as a bit of a Ravenclaw myself-to dump poor Ron in geek-land. I had fun exploring Michael and Anthony and their relationship-hey! Muggle role-playing games! And yes, when I looked at that threesome, I knew that Ron was going to have some eek moments, because, come on, how could he not?

"Brains/scars" was one of the requests, and so working out how they might tie in was part of the fun. Once I figured out the Nargle connection (so to speak), I knew Luna had to show up, which you know I never like. Heh.

And yeah, she was a bit less ethereal than usual, but I thought it fit here. I'm glad that it worked for you!

[gala_apples]

i'm so sorry that i didn't check this comm out earlier. i guess at some point i just thought i wasn't going to get a pinch hit, and i stopped looking.

but this was so awesome. r/a/m was the one i was positive wouldn't be chosen, and i'm so happy you did. and the plot was great, i love scar-related-plots, and ron knowing he has a problem that's not "omg i'm not gay!" related, and long!hair!anthony, and michael making a comment about ginny, and voyeur!luna HAHA and mentions of roleplaying, and yes, this was just perfect, i don't care how long i had to wait, because i got THIS.

[mickawber_fics]

YAY! I'm so happy that you enjoyed this! I had a blast with your prompt, so I'm glad that I pleased you as well as myself!

I had meant to write you to make sure that you got this, but I'm glad you found it on your own. :-D