Fic: The Star (PG)

[dexstarr]

Title: Between the Lines
Author: dexstarr
Type: Fiction
Length: 1,100 words
Main Character: Narcissa Malfoy
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: HP and all assorted belong to JKR and are not mine.
Warnings: None
Summary: Narcissa never thought she would love anyone more than she loved herself.
Card Interpretation: The Star: "Hope, guidance by one's conscience or

Comments

[lotrwariorgodss]

Such a true mother! Say what you like about Narcissa, she does love her little boy. Nice job!

[dexstarr]

Thanks! I'm glad that came through. As the non-maternal sort, it's always hard to know if I got it right.

[inamac]

That is a super pen portrait of Narcissa - moving from selfishness to selflessness, and a nice interpretation of the Star (In naming her son after a constellation, Narcissa hoped to imbue him with her family's legacy. - so right for the Blacks.

[dexstarr]

Why thank you! Narcissa popped in mind as soon as I read the card description; apart from being suggested, I thought it would be ironic, in a way, because Narcissa is a Black not named after a star.

[hpstrangelove]

This is exactly what having a child does to you - changes the center of your world. Great job.

[dexstarr]

Thanks! I'm glad that came through. As the non-maternal sort, it's always hard to know if I got it right.

[collectively]

Really well-done and in character; I truly believe this. Thanks for sharing!

[dexstarr]

Thanks! I'm glad it was believable.

[secretsolitaire]

A nice look at Narcissa! Seems quite plausible.

[dexstarr]

Thanks! I'm glad it was believable.