FIC: Remnants of Youth (by severed_lies, Snape/Draco, PG-13)

[ravenna_c_tan]

Title: Remnants of Youth
Author: severed_lies
Type: Fiction
Length: 9755
Main character or Pairing: Severus Snape/Draco Malfoy, Scorpius Malfoy
Card: (1) Four of Pentacles, (2) The Lovers, (3) Page of Wands
Card Interpretation: (1)Focusing on goals, but holding on too tightly and being overly cautious

Comments

[angelbabe_cj]

I like the way you have used the cards for this, taking the three different timeframes to construct the story. I also like how you put in that not so subtle poke at the canon ending here, it made me laugh; a much better use for all was well! I’m rather enamoured with Draco being the one to save Severus because of his feelings for him, it’s something which I can absolutely see happening. I also enjoyed Narcissa and Lucius’ roles here, and the unwitting insight Scorpius shows. Lovely fic :D

Sorry for the delay, this was read over a month ago and the comment saved on my computer, but I didn't have internet on it until now.